Walt Disney Presents!
100 Word Story35 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
I like this, especially the religions joining hands against ISIS, on whose planet? It does highlight however the deficiencies in our world, shows how far we have to go still to achieve common sense!! Good use of humour and great message. Faye
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I like this, especially the religions joining hands against ISIS, on whose planet? It does highlight however the deficiencies in our world, shows how far we have to go still to achieve common sense!! Good use of humour and great message. Faye
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ha! You know, I was just replying to a review's response and telling that writer how much I love the 100-word dash (no matter what it pays, or even if it does) and this is a good example why - if it's well-done, there's nothing more satisfying than a complete tale in 100 words. Nicely done!
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Ha! You know, I was just replying to a review's response and telling that writer how much I love the 100-word dash (no matter what it pays, or even if it does) and this is a good example why - if it's well-done, there's nothing more satisfying than a complete tale in 100 words. Nicely done!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from alexisleech
What a clever way to make an excellent point. As Phyllis was saying (in her words 'ranting') the other day, none of it makes sense any more and as your excellent short story proves, fairy tales are more believable than the stupidity being shown by our leaders. Well done!
Alexis x
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What a clever way to make an excellent point. As Phyllis was saying (in her words 'ranting') the other day, none of it makes sense any more and as your excellent short story proves, fairy tales are more believable than the stupidity being shown by our leaders. Well done!
Alexis x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from Linda Engel
yes for the joy of writing. Cute and very clever. and totally unbelieveable. I think when we get to heaven God's going to sit us down, separate us and send us to different corners for "time outs" to think about how bad we've been . great picture to compliment this.
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yes for the joy of writing. Cute and very clever. and totally unbelieveable. I think when we get to heaven God's going to sit us down, separate us and send us to different corners for "time outs" to think about how bad we've been . great picture to compliment this.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from Dean Kuch
You got that right, Mikey. Hey, I've seen pink elephants from time to time, so would that count or factor into the equation at all, LOL?
Speaking of pink dinosaurs, wasn't Dino from the Flintstones pink? I loved that dogosaurus when I was a kid! I also share my nickname with him. All of my family & friends call me "Deano. So naturally, I would have to vote for him too.
Great tale on how one day all religions came together and decided to play nice, but we both know that just ain't happenin', heh-heh!
Great work, Mikey...~Dean
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You got that right, Mikey. Hey, I've seen pink elephants from time to time, so would that count or factor into the equation at all, LOL?
Speaking of pink dinosaurs, wasn't Dino from the Flintstones pink? I loved that dogosaurus when I was a kid! I also share my nickname with him. All of my family & friends call me "Deano. So naturally, I would have to vote for him too.
Great tale on how one day all religions came together and decided to play nice, but we both know that just ain't happenin', heh-heh!
Great work, Mikey...~Dean
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from alf collier
Hi Michael. This so brought a smile to my face. There is always so much truth in the jest. Pink dinosaur? Wow, that'd be really credible. Every word necessary to the story with no waste. Loved it, alf
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Hi Michael. This so brought a smile to my face. There is always so much truth in the jest. Pink dinosaur? Wow, that'd be really credible. Every word necessary to the story with no waste. Loved it, alf
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Joy of writing as only you know how to do it.
Still the twist of the story.
Religions unite....right.
Loved it though and it is still you.
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Joy of writing as only you know how to do it.
Still the twist of the story.
Religions unite....right.
Loved it though and it is still you.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from JJ Rowe
If only my kids cartoons were more like this, I'd watch more. You are a 1 man show with a message. And I love it. I always enjoy your dialogue. Nice job!
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If only my kids cartoons were more like this, I'd watch more. You are a 1 man show with a message. And I love it. I always enjoy your dialogue. Nice job!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from krys123
Mikey; simply great and my friend and totally exasperating in a comical sense. The imagery that you display and describe and expressive in your writing truly unbelievable and that's what makes it so predictable. One certain thing that is a problem with the idea JB is that while all the religions are wiping out ISIS they'll end up wiping themselves out also. That it be great. 'a land without religion!' I really enjoyed this very much Mikey it really opened my thoughts and gave food for also.
Thank you for sharing and posting and good luck in the contest.
Alex :-)
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Mikey; simply great and my friend and totally exasperating in a comical sense. The imagery that you display and describe and expressive in your writing truly unbelievable and that's what makes it so predictable. One certain thing that is a problem with the idea JB is that while all the religions are wiping out ISIS they'll end up wiping themselves out also. That it be great. 'a land without religion!' I really enjoyed this very much Mikey it really opened my thoughts and gave food for also.
Thank you for sharing and posting and good luck in the contest.
Alex :-)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there, Mikey,
Walt Disney must be turning in his grave! The famous Nazi sympathiser that he was.
I love the idea of Disney attempting something like this, and the last idea is not too far off the mark. I mean, there have been a fair few Muppets in there already.
Great fun read.
GMG
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Hi there, Mikey,
Walt Disney must be turning in his grave! The famous Nazi sympathiser that he was.
I love the idea of Disney attempting something like this, and the last idea is not too far off the mark. I mean, there have been a fair few Muppets in there already.
Great fun read.
GMG
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
