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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely way to remember the passing of your mother-in-law, Tom, and how wonderful that was for your wife's sister to have seen the way she left you all. This is a lovely tribute and a lovely photo. :) Sandra. xsx
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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What a lovely way to remember the passing of your mother-in-law, Tom, and how wonderful that was for your wife's sister to have seen the way she left you all. This is a lovely tribute and a lovely photo. :) Sandra. xsx
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thank you Sandra. Sherry told that story and i read the poem at the funeral today.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Sorry for your loss, Tom. You've penned a wonderful poem for the last, peaceful moments of her life. Death doesn't have to be ugly. (Never heard of a Faux Limerick before--well done.)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Sorry for your loss, Tom. You've penned a wonderful poem for the last, peaceful moments of her life. Death doesn't have to be ugly. (Never heard of a Faux Limerick before--well done.)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015
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Thank you for the kind thoughts.
Comment from Joan E.
I did not know there was a name for a poem that doesn't follow the meter or humor or often bawdy aspect of a limerick. I often create this type of poem for occasions as you did here. I enjoyed your rhymes and your capturing your mother-in-law at peace in her last moments. Warm regards- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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I did not know there was a name for a poem that doesn't follow the meter or humor or often bawdy aspect of a limerick. I often create this type of poem for occasions as you did here. I enjoyed your rhymes and your capturing your mother-in-law at peace in her last moments. Warm regards- Joan
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thank you Joan. Yes, i learned that from Gungalo. She wrote some beautiful ones.
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What a lovely tribute to Gungalo--it's wonderful how we can keep sharing knowledge on FanStory. Good night- Joan
Comment from emrpoems
Good memorial poem for your mother-in-law. This suggests that dying is not as bad as people believe it to be. A well composed Limerick with all elements present
Lovely picture of your mother in law
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Good memorial poem for your mother-in-law. This suggests that dying is not as bad as people believe it to be. A well composed Limerick with all elements present
Lovely picture of your mother in law
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thank you Erica. I appreciate your sentiments.
Comment from rod007
As a good person she took her limousine ride to heaven with the angel. God bless her and support your family in these sad times after her death. Excellent rhyming and pace.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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As a good person she took her limousine ride to heaven with the angel. God bless her and support your family in these sad times after her death. Excellent rhyming and pace.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thank you rod. For your comforting words.
Comment from patcelaw
My sister was a nurse in the ICU at a hospital for 25 years and she said she had seen many people die, and she could always tell those who knew the Lord because the death was peaceful, but for those who didn't know Him there deaths were a struggle.
Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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My sister was a nurse in the ICU at a hospital for 25 years and she said she had seen many people die, and she could always tell those who knew the Lord because the death was peaceful, but for those who didn't know Him there deaths were a struggle.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thank you Patricia. I can believe that, truly.
Comment from risktaker
Thanks for capturing the last moment of life in such a clear and happy image. I have never seen this event portrayed so positively.I feel her calm acceptance and lack of fear to go. I love the word choice, tone, and flow. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thanks for capturing the last moment of life in such a clear and happy image. I have never seen this event portrayed so positively.I feel her calm acceptance and lack of fear to go. I love the word choice, tone, and flow. Excellent job.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thank you risktaker.
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