Comment from Maria C.

Exceptional

This is a super minute poem and I like the sentiment behind it.
Sailing away under the fray and one calm day say it all. Just to have one day of relaxation away from all the clatter of life. I like the picture you chose to go with your words. The poem form seems spot on.
Blessings,
Maria

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Thanks for the lovely six.

reply by Maria C. on 06-Feb-2015

You are most welcome.
Maria C.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I'm delighted that one of Brooke's inspired you to create this Minute poem. I enjoyed your rhymes and shared your wish for "one calm day"--the photo certainly helped to conjure the restful image. Hugs- Joan

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine . Have a lovely last part of the week.

Comment from Treischel

Exceptional

One of your best, Ine. A well executed minute poem that takes us to the seashore to let the calming waves give a place of peace and contentment. You creates a lovely mood perfectly matched to the image,

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Many thanks for the lovely six.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Lovely poem, Ine, and I know why Brooke's poem inspired your poem. It is really lovely and yours is inspiring too. good luck in this Minute Poem contest! :) Sandra

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Ine. Great work mate. The last line says it all my friend. I have been praying for just one calm day for a long time now. Brooke is an easy writer to be inspired by. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. And yes she is.

Comment from krys123

Good

Ine; I believe I understand which poem of Brooke's you're talking about. And you completely achieved then recognizing the poem and representing add it to your writing. A great choice of picture that you chosen for this poem and represents it very well. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

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 Comment Written 04-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, I love your poem...and broke is some one wonderful to inspired by...I can see why her poem would have inspired you...love the wording...and the picture beautiful...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

reply by l.raven on 04-Feb-2015

your so welcome Ine...and you have a great week too!!! luff xxoo

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Excellent adherence to minute form format. Rhyme works well, except some of the wording in second stanza sounds a bit too clipped. "Where sky clings mind" doesn't make sense. Last stanza great. I like the thought of the prayer for one calm day. So desirable to find peace. judi

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Very compelling wish indeed...just one calm day....many can relate to
and enjoin you in your wish! Great that you had such inspiration
from Brooke's poem to share this beautiful sentiment, very smooth
tone and flow and heartwarming message indeed.
Blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Ine - this is a really good Minute poem. I am surprised you did not enter it in the contest. I enjoyed the read and you chose a lovely picture. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. I thought I did.