Handling Bullies-Orally
5-7-5 humorous10 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Sometimes you just have to call a bully by the proper name and the retort was a great one, Hopefully a bully would be put in his place with a response like this one. Patricia
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Sometimes you just have to call a bully by the proper name and the retort was a great one, Hopefully a bully would be put in his place with a response like this one. Patricia
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
Comment from punster
Technical stuff: 5-7-5, et al: All OK
Laughability for MY taste: Scowl
(on the scale of: Scowl, Eyes Rolling, PokerFace, Smile, Chuckle, Guffaw, Belly Laugh)
Cleverness: Good
Non-detracting elements (vulgarity, bad language): BAD
This piece has no appeal for me
Overall though it is Good
Punster
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Technical stuff: 5-7-5, et al: All OK
Laughability for MY taste: Scowl
(on the scale of: Scowl, Eyes Rolling, PokerFace, Smile, Chuckle, Guffaw, Belly Laugh)
Cleverness: Good
Non-detracting elements (vulgarity, bad language): BAD
This piece has no appeal for me
Overall though it is Good
Punster
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
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Appreciate the input. I would point out that there were ample warnings attached as to the nature of the piece to spare those who might find it offensive. Doesn't seem fair that you would ignore the warnings and review it anyway to voice your displeasure over content. But, I can't say I don't agree with you. :)
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I was under the impression that all the entries had to be assessed by the writers/contributors.
Sorry if i misunderstood.
I am still pretty new here
Punster
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Oh. No, you don't have to actually review them to cast a vote though that is a great attitude to have indeed. It's more than a lot of folks do just giving each entry a read. Don't worry about being new, I was about a year ago. I was just having a little fun. I hope you didn't take it too seriously. :) I think you're giving a lot of consideration in your reviews and that's going to be appreciated. Most of the folks here are good natured. There are a few though... Ask questions and dive right in like you have. You'll be fine! mikey
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh this is hilarious, author, especially the part about not wanting to offend anyone. :) It's certainly a little bawdy, especially the guy in the picture. But the bullied handled the bully just like a tricky dicky.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Oh this is hilarious, author, especially the part about not wanting to offend anyone. :) It's certainly a little bawdy, especially the guy in the picture. But the bullied handled the bully just like a tricky dicky.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
Comment from Glasstruth
LOL. I bet some will find this offensive, but censorship isn't my thing. A nice take on pussy and dick. They make for a perfect couple. LOL. Wonderful humor. Good luck with the contest. Les
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LOL. I bet some will find this offensive, but censorship isn't my thing. A nice take on pussy and dick. They make for a perfect couple. LOL. Wonderful humor. Good luck with the contest. Les
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
Comment from lancellot
Yes, that would be a funny reply to a bully, but I think he better be prepared to run or fight for his life. A funny 5-7-5 and good on the count.
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Yes, that would be a funny reply to a bully, but I think he better be prepared to run or fight for his life. A funny 5-7-5 and good on the count.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
Comment from Eric1
This is a really most wonderfully clever entry for this Humorous 5-7-5 competition, as you said, you didn't really need the warnings, good luck in the contest my friend.
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This is a really most wonderfully clever entry for this Humorous 5-7-5 competition, as you said, you didn't really need the warnings, good luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
Comment from juliesibs
No offense taken... This is awesome. Bullying is one of single most issues in our school system today. The way this reads, I'm loving the Nerd and laughing out loud in the face of the bully.
Great Job,
Julie
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No offense taken... This is awesome. Bullying is one of single most issues in our school system today. The way this reads, I'm loving the Nerd and laughing out loud in the face of the bully.
Great Job,
Julie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
Comment from royowen
I think this a highly imaginative, thoughtful entry in this 5/7/5 contest, I love the artwork, poetry combination, tongue in cheek, amusing and worthy entry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
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I think this a highly imaginative, thoughtful entry in this 5/7/5 contest, I love the artwork, poetry combination, tongue in cheek, amusing and worthy entry, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
You have met the stated qualifications of this 5-7-5 writing prompt contest as to form and syllable count. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
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You have met the stated qualifications of this 5-7-5 writing prompt contest as to form and syllable count. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
Comment from c_lucas
Digestively, a very true story. When an unwanted piece of flesh enters, bite down HARD. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a humorous read.
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Digestively, a very true story. When an unwanted piece of flesh enters, bite down HARD. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a humorous read.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
