Silver & Gold
Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry (I hope!)68 total reviews
Comment from thee-name
Excellent 5-7-5. I got a good laugh out of that.
SILENCE IS GOLDEN
IMBECILES SHOULD BE KEEP SILENT
DUCT TAPE IS SILVER
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Excellent 5-7-5. I got a good laugh out of that.
SILENCE IS GOLDEN
IMBECILES SHOULD BE KEEP SILENT
DUCT TAPE IS SILVER
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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Thanks, thee-name. I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on it for me. ~Dean
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THANK YOU!
Comment from DR DIP
yeah that just about sums up how I feel about getting a one star rating for a poem I wrote called no words required and the reason he gave me ? it didn't rhyme for fk sake you should read it its double line rhyme all the way through but I digress this is the most apt poem for some arseholes on here who have nothing better to do than review so ridiculously low its not funny in the 18 months coming to fanstory I have never received one fkg star and there is nothing on his profile portfolio posted surprise!
surprise!
sorry dean your little gem just got me going the poem so fkd is called no words required and it was written because I felt the image that inspired me really did require no words of its beauty
dip
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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yeah that just about sums up how I feel about getting a one star rating for a poem I wrote called no words required and the reason he gave me ? it didn't rhyme for fk sake you should read it its double line rhyme all the way through but I digress this is the most apt poem for some arseholes on here who have nothing better to do than review so ridiculously low its not funny in the 18 months coming to fanstory I have never received one fkg star and there is nothing on his profile portfolio posted surprise!
surprise!
sorry dean your little gem just got me going the poem so fkd is called no words required and it was written because I felt the image that inspired me really did require no words of its beauty
dip
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2015
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A one?! Could it have been an inadvertent click of the wrong rating, Dip? I've received just one - 1 star rating since I've been here. When I confronted the reviewer to ask them what I could do to the poem to warrant it getting at least a four, they replied that it was just a "brain fart" (their words, not mine) due to old age. They never rectified it.
Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo of tape that complements your poem very well. I like the way you put it in this 5-7-5. We just were never allowed to use the word imbeciles. But your poem made me simile. Best wishes for the prompt.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Excellent photo of tape that complements your poem very well. I like the way you put it in this 5-7-5. We just were never allowed to use the word imbeciles. But your poem made me simile. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2015
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Thank you very much for your comments, Ine. I appreciate them as always. ~Dean
Comment from honeytree
I loved the art work ,the title and words written for the contest. Silence can be golden within our lives.
I guess if one wanted someone to be silent
duct tape is a good choice could hurt though on the mouth.
honeytree
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I loved the art work ,the title and words written for the contest. Silence can be golden within our lives.
I guess if one wanted someone to be silent
duct tape is a good choice could hurt though on the mouth.
honeytree
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
Comment from chasennov
Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry (I hope!) Silver & Gold.' your 5-7-5 is kinda funny in a way. Does it mean imbeciles are golden too? Well done, Dean.
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Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry (I hope!) Silver & Gold.' your 5-7-5 is kinda funny in a way. Does it mean imbeciles are golden too? Well done, Dean.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2015
Comment from LateBloomer
Dean Kuch, I love this poem. It would make a wonderful graphic tee-shirt. I especially liked:
Imbeciles should keep silent
Duct tape is silver
(Excellent)
This poem "cracked" me up. I am smiling and laughing.
Wonderful humor. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Dean Kuch, I love this poem. It would make a wonderful graphic tee-shirt. I especially liked:
Imbeciles should keep silent
Duct tape is silver
(Excellent)
This poem "cracked" me up. I am smiling and laughing.
Wonderful humor. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2015
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Thank you very much, LateBloomer. I am not used to getting six star ratings for my shorter stuff, so your generosity is doubly appreciated. I wish there were about two more voters who felt the way you do about the poem, LOL. It lost the contest by a single vote.
Anyhow, much obliged for the awesome review, my friend. :) ~Dean
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Ahh, and now I feel guilty for not keep up with the contests. Maybe, this poem will be chosen as the poem of the month ... The glass is half full. Lol, LateBloomer
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Hah, well, ya just never know I suppose, LB. But I think it would be the first short form poem to ever have been nominated for Poem of the Month. I think we have a better chance of Obama being elected president again. Heh-heh... ;)
Comment from flamingstar
Classic. I don't know what more I can add to this review other than the usual good-luck wishes and confirmation that your syllable count is correct! Winner!!
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Classic. I don't know what more I can add to this review other than the usual good-luck wishes and confirmation that your syllable count is correct! Winner!!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Doc Holiday
Very good! I liked this clever 5-7-5 write.
Blunt and to the point of being funny and direct at the people who need to hear it most. I'm afraid that the duct tape, however, may be covering their ears instead of their mouths.
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Very good! I liked this clever 5-7-5 write.
Blunt and to the point of being funny and direct at the people who need to hear it most. I'm afraid that the duct tape, however, may be covering their ears instead of their mouths.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
OMG- this is so very clever and I know some people I would like to add silver to. I prefer silence and few people around except for my Fanstory friends~Debbie
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OMG- this is so very clever and I know some people I would like to add silver to. I prefer silence and few people around except for my Fanstory friends~Debbie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
Comment from Cedar
This one is really funny. I've had such experiences over the years where I could have used some duct tape. The wife gets a little rowdy at times (ha). Good luck in the contest. Bill
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This one is really funny. I've had such experiences over the years where I could have used some duct tape. The wife gets a little rowdy at times (ha). Good luck in the contest. Bill
Comment Written 03-Feb-2015
