A Kiss by the Book
First kiss...40 total reviews
Comment from Ashar001
A beautiful story, most (if not all) of us can relate to: the Great Uncertainty, the stupidity and clumsiness of your answers and behavior. You have depicted it with great charm.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
  |
A beautiful story, most (if not all) of us can relate to: the Great Uncertainty, the stupidity and clumsiness of your answers and behavior. You have depicted it with great charm.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
-
Thank you Ashar. I certainly appreciate your stopping by. John
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A cute story of teenage experimentation. He was a pretty smoothe operator, she showed the right amount of over-the-top reaction. Well done. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
|
A cute story of teenage experimentation. He was a pretty smoothe operator, she showed the right amount of over-the-top reaction. Well done. :) Nancy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
-
Thank you, nancy. I appreciate your stopping to read and review. John
Comment from Janet Foor
So sorry you missed the contest. This is a delightful little story of that "First Kiss". What wonderful memories this conjured up of the innocent first time.
Well done.
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
|
So sorry you missed the contest. This is a delightful little story of that "First Kiss". What wonderful memories this conjured up of the innocent first time.
Well done.
Janet
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2015
-
Thank you very much, Janet got stopping to read. I appreciate it. John
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Sorry you missed the contest. A fun short read peeking into the minds of teenagers. The first kiss has so much drama attached to it--good descriptions, John. Love in a library, huh? Maybe I should try it sometime. LOL
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
|
Sorry you missed the contest. A fun short read peeking into the minds of teenagers. The first kiss has so much drama attached to it--good descriptions, John. Love in a library, huh? Maybe I should try it sometime. LOL
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
-
Thank you Green Lake Girl. I appreciate your stopping to read and share your words of encouragement.
John
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Oh! This one bought some memories flooding back for sure.
I enjoyed the way the two characters came alive. She was all girly, nervous and unsure whilst he was the man strong and sure of himself.
Kissing is a wonderful discovery and you showed this by her reaction.
When in doubt always share your deepest secrets with your faithful teddy bear. LOL.
Well written and thoughtfully plotted.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
|
Oh! This one bought some memories flooding back for sure.
I enjoyed the way the two characters came alive. She was all girly, nervous and unsure whilst he was the man strong and sure of himself.
Kissing is a wonderful discovery and you showed this by her reaction.
When in doubt always share your deepest secrets with your faithful teddy bear. LOL.
Well written and thoughtfully plotted.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 01-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
-
Thank you Shirley for a great review filled with encouragement.
I appreciate it very much. John
Comment from dmt1967
This is a cute story. I liked the blinking of the eye action, although it was a bit long winded. I would have said 'each time he kissed me, my eyes closed.' Otherwise great story. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
|
This is a cute story. I liked the blinking of the eye action, although it was a bit long winded. I would have said 'each time he kissed me, my eyes closed.' Otherwise great story. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
-
That's what's less writers different. Thank you for sharing . I appreciate it. John
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
That book came in handy.
I guess all teenagers 'bump into each other' on purpose. I could feel your characters nervousness. The approach was flawless... Razz-a-ma-tazz-ingly groovey.
Super fun to read John,
Love, Carolyn
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
 |
That book came in handy.
I guess all teenagers 'bump into each other' on purpose. I could feel your characters nervousness. The approach was flawless... Razz-a-ma-tazz-ingly groovey.
Super fun to read John,
Love, Carolyn
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
-
Thank you Carolyn for a great review and a star filled skyline. I do appreciate it . You're okay for a Cardinal fan... Pretty soon. I owe you a story....
John
Comment from Rikki66
A fond memory; of a wooded knoll, at Camp Hakata, Japan. Her name was Sandra. When she blabbed to her friends, I also kissed, Joanne and Martha. A cad at seven. By the way it was the faerie in the tree stump, not open or closed eyes.
Can you tell I loved the story.
Rick
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
|
A fond memory; of a wooded knoll, at Camp Hakata, Japan. Her name was Sandra. When she blabbed to her friends, I also kissed, Joanne and Martha. A cad at seven. By the way it was the faerie in the tree stump, not open or closed eyes.
Can you tell I loved the story.
Rick
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
-
Yes I can. Thank you kindly.
John
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
AW, what a shame, John, this would have been a smashing entry. I love little stories like this, they pack a lot into them and keep the reader entranced. This one did it for me. :) Really lovely story, my friend. xsx Sandra.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
|
AW, what a shame, John, this would have been a smashing entry. I love little stories like this, they pack a lot into them and keep the reader entranced. This one did it for me. :) Really lovely story, my friend. xsx Sandra.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
-
Thank you, Sandra. Your words are encouraging and kind. Always appreciated. John
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi jmdg1954
One visit to the library that will, no doubt, live in legend. It certainly will live in the memory of the kissers.
An amusingly touching little tale of a clandestine kiss.
Patrick
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
|
Hi jmdg1954
One visit to the library that will, no doubt, live in legend. It certainly will live in the memory of the kissers.
An amusingly touching little tale of a clandestine kiss.
Patrick
Comment Written 31-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2015
-
Patrick, thank you very much for reading and sharing. John
