Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

'By that gentle sigh between day (ad) night' I think you mean (and)
This is a very good poem and filled with emotion. The pink background gave the poem a softer feel which went nicely with the poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thank you ...for sharing your kind and thoughtful appreciations on this presentation.
and cited its most significant features. My pleasure to share, and thank you for
the kind visit! Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from Joan E.

Exceptional

I relished "sinking into sunset with you"! I enjoyed your alliteration of "s's" and your appealing to several senses with "sigh," "gaze" and "tingle" along with your striking images. Here's to tomorrow! Warm hugs and happy Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015

Ahhh...hello Sunshine...
There you go again dear, having my joys and hooray's doing cartweheels again...LOL...
No one puts me through more 'gravity' hoops than you...LOL...such instant climate change too! LOL...
Your relishments are my relishments too....so thank you too! May you keep sighing into your
sunset's evermore, you lucky Calif. gal!....Love and hugs galore! Ronni

reply by Joan E. on 26-Jan-2015

Talking about climate change--it's been in the 80's this weekend in Southern California and the sunsets have been extraordinary. I'll think of you each time I enjoy the next ones. Here's to more happy cartwheels and sweet dreams- Joan

Comment from mountainwriter49

Exceptional

Good Morning, Ronni

I did so enjoy your free verse musing this morning as I was drinking some fresh Columbian java. Your poem has an etherial feel to it due to your wonderful use of phrasing which creates a delightful visual imagery for the reader to enjoy. I think the last stanza is my favorite.

I've just one suggestion as noted below:
mind[']s yesterdays

Well done, my friend,
Ray

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2015

Hello Ray,
Ahh...I must say, your most awesome and expressive thoughts and comments on this musing, is as
savory as your savoring your Columbian java! You have as equally exquisite taste in your java treats!
I am truly pleased you found this to be an especially enjoyable read, sharing your kind compliments
on the imagery and 'ethereal feel', and noting your favorite stanza....also your little suggestion on (mind's)
and will fix. And likewise, sincerest appreciations for the EXTRA STAR'... once again, you have made
my heart smile with your kind compliments and keep perceptions. Your visit always a treat!
May all your sunset's be beautiful.....gratefully, Ronni

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork that you post.
I fell in love with those windows, you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thank you sweetie, so pleased you enjoyed. That window is at my Calif. house..and view
of the sea and sunsets....I just love it and is so mesmerizing! Pleasure to share, and
pleasure to have your visit dear! Blessings, Ronni

reply by misscookie on 26-Jan-2015

You're very welcome and blessed to be around such beauty.
Have a blessed day.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

This is a beautifully realised poem. It gently draws the reader in and through the poem. The imagery is soft and striking. out with the old and in with the new.

Very nicely written.
GMG

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Well hello GMG!
Thank you for the positive and inspiring thoughts and comments on
this presentation. Happy you enjoyed the imagery and flow, and
shared with your kind visit too! Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

this is a beautiful poem about a sunset, I love to watch the sun sink and disappear on the horizon.

Ambling hues glow in slowly descending horizon
ribbons the sky in rows of flowing pastels

The image is fantastic, I would love to paint this a mural Where did you get it from?

Well done Mary

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2015

Thank you...for your expressive appreciations of this presentation, and
sharing your comments and compliments. That 'image' is the window
view of the sea from my Calif. home I live in 6 months of the year.
I gather you likely may be an artist...and would indeed make a
fantastic mural. Is that your specialty, murals? To me mural
art has always been totally captivating.
Thanks again for your great comments and sharing.
Best wishes always, Ronni