A Book of Songs
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Big Sister"Metre ... Ballads & Slant Rhyme
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Comment from skye
Charming and true. Big sisters do tend to their younger siblings until they fly, and sometimes for long after.
Cute poem, with great art choice.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Charming and true. Big sisters do tend to their younger siblings until they fly, and sometimes for long after.
Cute poem, with great art choice.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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well I am the third of four boys and with the youngest and older having greater difficulties than myself we have all been called to care after one another for many years especially since we lost our Father at a young age ... i WAS ONLY SEVENTEEN HE WAS 47.
Comment from kiwijenny
What a beautiful benediction type poem..it's wonderful
It resonated with me because I am the oldest of four ..it was my task to look after the younger ones...and I loved them
God bless
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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What a beautiful benediction type poem..it's wonderful
It resonated with me because I am the oldest of four ..it was my task to look after the younger ones...and I loved them
God bless
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015
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Thank you very much for the compliments ... I gave the poem to lil Lilly and her parents and they enjoyed it and as an extra bonus we are going to get it made by an artist into something more permanent and more treasured than just an ink and A4 sheet. lol.
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Awesome
