Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

More and more I get the feeling that some of the poetry on this site which includes this piece should be use in a clinical manner. Maybe placed in institutions or public places where they bring the information to the public.
Perfect composition with good rhythm and rhyme.
thanks for the notes

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015

Thank you for taking time out to read and comment on the poem for me, Erica. I greatly appreciate it, as always. :}

~Dean

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm sure you have an answer Dean, I think it's almost like a gigantic plot against the human race, where somebody is working to destroy the youth of the world, or at least try to manipulate the minds to screw them into the thought that a life is not worth living, and making suggestions of inadequacy in our youth, just a ramble! It's spiritual, as Paul intimates, we fight not against flesh and blood! Well done, Dean, beautifully composed, nicely written even meter, abab rhyming is great! Well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015

Thanks so much, Roy, and you're right, Satan come only to devour and destroy. And what better place is there to start than on our unsuspecting youth?

I sincerely appreciate your review, my friend. :} ~Dean

reply by royowen on 16-Jan-2015

Most welcome, Dean, my friend,

Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

I should never read your stuff before I go to bed. I swear I heard this soft rumbling and thought it was my stomach!

Dark, but a very clear example about how kids romanticize death without and before experiencing life.

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015

Hah-hah, yes, I hear similar bedtime remarks quite often, Ingrid. However, I take it as the highest of compliments, LOL. Thanks so much for reading and commenting, my friend. As always, I sincerely appreciate it! :}

~Dean

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Parents seem to be the last to know.
Kids just egg other kids on not realizing the full extent of what they try to do.
I finally falls to the ones that are there when I happens and then it is almost too late as no one listens by then but just blames.
great piece dear friend.

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2015

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Barb. I really appreciate that. :) ~Dean