Comment from Adri7enne

Exceptional

You're using language I seldom see in your posts. I guess Shades is really upset, uh? Love it!

No one owns Ess. And it's time Oz played his usual part.

You've got me taking ownership of your characters. LOL! Remember Misery? LOL! Don't 'fuck up', snod. Your fans could get dangerous.
Next!

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Yeah, I don't use strong language and hesitate when y users do, but Shades is ex-forces and very angry. I think he would swear at this point. Thanks for the review. So you're my 'biggest fan', huh? Good to know should I ever disappear

reply by Adri7enne on 12-Jan-2015

You'll know where you are. Shhh! Don't tell anyone else. You might be gone for a long time. We wouldn't want to be interrupted. LOL!

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

That is scary and intriguing in equal measure

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day mate. Unfortunately this is the first chapter that I have come across. It is very well written and in easy to read language. Now I will have to go and read the rest when I get some time, I will add it to my list. Cheers and good work, Fez

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thanks, glad you liked it

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Hello sno,

Just jumping into your story, so I don't feel qualified to comment on the plot.

Good dialogue. You maintained the momentum and had me curious as to what would transpire.

Nicely done.

Sonali

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2015

Thanks. Glad you liked it