Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Exceptional

Albeit horror - it's really entertaining -
so cleverly thought out and well presented -
keeping good rhythm and rhyme throughout...
all in all, most impressive and deserving
of a six.

good luck with the contest - surely a winner!!


Margaret

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Comment from Alan K Pease

Excellent

This the first of the Phyllis Stewart love fest that I have read. I too have a great feeling for her writing, but explore more on her novels. It must be awesome to concentrate on zombies and lift them into loving, creative persons. Thank you very much for this very entertaining poetic essay.

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Comment from thee-name

Excellent

Excellent poem. Lines rhymed good to writing.
ON A ARTIC EXPEDITION TO FIND THE MONSTER FRANKENSTEIN
MY TEAM AND I FOUND SOMETHING WHICH NUMBED OUR COLLECTIVE MINDS,

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Comment from mshirachot

Excellent

Wow! It is going to be hard for any story to top this masterpiece, albeit a bit bloody and brutal. The whole presentation is put together well with the sickeningly gruesome photos.

Best wishes with this contest entry. I'd say you've got a real good shot at being the winning entry.

Blessings,
Marsha

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Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent tribute to Phyllis and her penguin series, Deano.

Hilarious spooky way of turning her cuties into monsters unfit for children's' 'consumption'. ;-)

Great fun dialogue between you an the 'evil' Phyllis. LOL.

Original and inspired write, my friend.

Cheers, Ray

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Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi (I know who you are) mystery author, well for goodness sake, there's only one person who could have written this fantastically gory tribute to Phillis's penguins, and very well written it is too, I too am a great admirer of her work so I appreciate the work that has gone into this wonderful poem, Good luck in the contest my friend.

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Thanks, Eric, and based upon my reviews lately I think I'm gonna need that luck, LOL.

Much obliged!

reply by Eric1 on 08-Jan-2015

I don't think so my friend.

reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

I'm very glad to know you have that much confidence in me. ;)

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahahahaha! G'day Anon, LOL. You are cracked, warped, unstable, defective, insane and just fuckin' nutso. That's why Mr Anon i love your work so much. It seems another win here Sir...This is great. Cheers Fez (I'm going to turn Champer's pet Canary into a vampire, while she is at school)

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Hah, thanks, mate, and I'd really like to see that when you do. Just give me a shout, and I'll be there. Heh-heh-heh...

Much obliged! ;)

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I have a suspicion who did this post. No matter, it seems to be tailored to the prompt, and is grammatically well written, and full of imagery, so I think it rates five stars.

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Thanks, LIJ Red. Much obliged.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

OH MY GOODNESS, this is so classic and different. Once I started reading I was mesmerized.This is such a clever tale and for me gives new meanings and challenges to Happy Feet. Nicely crafted and played out
Bear

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Thanks for your comments, Bear. Much appreciated. :)

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This story is gory but quite creative. I can't imagine Phyllis involving herself with horrors of this kind of encounter, though. Not in her nature. Be that as it may, it is definitely one of a kind. Solid rhyme. :0 GracieAnn

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2015

Hah-ha, you're kiddin' me, right? Phyllis writes entire novels about demonic entities taking over human being minds, bodies and souls, and you think she's going to be averse to a little silly, comedic verse about zombie penguins? Uh-uh, I already know that ain't gonna' happen.

Thanks for your review, GracieAnn. :]

~Dean