The Wonder
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "you are..."miscellaneous poems
7 total reviews
Comment from michaelcahill
This is just beauty in every way. Every word is perfection and it works so well. The presentation is awesome with the perfect song to read it over and over again to. Greatness. mikey
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
This is just beauty in every way. Every word is perfection and it works so well. The presentation is awesome with the perfect song to read it over and over again to. Greatness. mikey
Comment Written 06-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2015
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Hey Mike....-smile- thank you Sir....ah just a little thing....thanks though Bro...big love Michael
Comment from jlsavell
I watch you write.. night and day, day and night. Your expressions so intense, trying to find the right words, and you do ..absolutely. Your mind wonders and collects the purest thoughts, like a rain barrel collects life-giving water. This is simply and undeniably beautiful.
Love you dearly.. Jimi
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
I watch you write.. night and day, day and night. Your expressions so intense, trying to find the right words, and you do ..absolutely. Your mind wonders and collects the purest thoughts, like a rain barrel collects life-giving water. This is simply and undeniably beautiful.
Love you dearly.. Jimi
Comment Written 05-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015
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Hi Sweetie...-smile-....well its been my medicine for a while now. ...and I thank you for enjoying my steadying...but please lets keep my secrets and discuss them in anolitic judgement with every pom pom twirling x-nun...K...? WOOOOOooOooooo WOOOOoooooooo BIG LOVE!!
Comment from daeneam
A few but powerful and affectionate twenty three-word. A very Michael kind of poem: romantic and precise.
How you've been, dear Michael? I hope you had a great holiday! God bless us and cheers to 2015! Lots o' love c", mae
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
A few but powerful and affectionate twenty three-word. A very Michael kind of poem: romantic and precise.
How you've been, dear Michael? I hope you had a great holiday! God bless us and cheers to 2015! Lots o' love c", mae
Comment Written 04-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015
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Hi Mae Mae...-smile- how are you...? ahh just a lil' sumpin' sumpin'...-wink- thank you dear...big love michael
Comment from Joan E.
More stunning artwork--your ballet dancer is divine--I'm not one for tattoos but the tree of life is fascinating. I enjoyed your alliteration of "b's" and references to the positive sun. Cheers from Antarctica's islands- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
More stunning artwork--your ballet dancer is divine--I'm not one for tattoos but the tree of life is fascinating. I enjoyed your alliteration of "b's" and references to the positive sun. Cheers from Antarctica's islands- Joan
Comment Written 03-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2015
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Hello Joan...what the heck are you doing there...brrrrr...Aruba sounds warmer...just don't go to any disco techs...-wink- haha...hey say hello to Santa....big love Michael
Comment from l.raven
Hey you... I wish I had another six....sigh....I love this poem...and the song a special meaning....smiling...I am so glad you found the animation pictures...I knew you would make them work...you are an artist...and a poet...so love it...well written...Love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
Hey you... I wish I had another six....sigh....I love this poem...and the song a special meaning....smiling...I am so glad you found the animation pictures...I knew you would make them work...you are an artist...and a poet...so love it...well written...Love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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thank you...-smile- you call me tomorrow if you need to....I pray it all goes well...it will...-smile- Big love Michael
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I will...and you are so welcome...smiling back...love xxoo
Comment from lynglyng
Very well done. Your words deliver a poetic feel that all poems should possess. The picture and movie add so much atmosphere to your writing. Thank you for sharing. I would not change anything as it is all so well put together.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
Very well done. Your words deliver a poetic feel that all poems should possess. The picture and movie add so much atmosphere to your writing. Thank you for sharing. I would not change anything as it is all so well put together.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Thank you ....-smile-...its my medicine now. happy you enjoyed...big love Michael
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hi Michael,
What a sunrise she is!
Luscious free verse to begin 2015 with.
Happy New Year to you. Hope you had a blessed Christmas.
Sonali
(Until next time!)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
Hi Michael,
What a sunrise she is!
Luscious free verse to begin 2015 with.
Happy New Year to you. Hope you had a blessed Christmas.
Sonali
(Until next time!)
Comment Written 02-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2015
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Hi Sonali...-smile- happy New Year to you too...may every good wish of yours be granted life...big love Michael