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A visit with my muse

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Comment from Sasha
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My muse has never introduced herself to me--mine is female. You two sound like an old--very old--married couple bickering away. I like how you emphasized the work and discipline needed to be a good writer. Something I certainly need to work on. This is a great entry for the contest and as always, I wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Jake and I have been hanging out forever. Thanks,
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I loved it!!!!! I often feel like my muse is cheating on me. Then when I think about it, I am the one who usually stands him up. Funny we both have muses who are male. I'll bet Freud would have a field day with that. Good sexual undertone to this. I like that you focused on the writing and the bull shit that goes along with it. Well written and good luck in the contest. Gretchen

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Jake has been around forever and I really never gave his gender a second thought. Progress, huh?
Comment from kiwijenny
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Thank you ....grumpy I say ...whaaaaaat Muse told you to edit!!!!
Mine said the same thing....I have a friend who edits I approached her, but it's like having a house cleaner...I've got to straighten my house before I let anyone in to know how truly disgusting I am....my novel-house needs a spring clean before I let loose...I thought muse was a derivative of amuse...no such luck
Well written
God bless

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Mine ain't telling jokes any more--that's for sure.
Comment from skye
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Wow! You captured the reality, the whimsy, and the work of writing. You made it come alive in the persona of your muse Jake, who cracks the whip and delivers a no nonsense formula for cleaning out the drivel and attending to business.
Excellent.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Thanks for the stars--I though I was just bitchin'. but my guy is seriously getting ugly and demanding.
Comment from Jean Lutz
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Talk about being married to your muse. This sounds like a couple that have been married so long even the insults fit like soft gloves. I wish you well in the contest and look forward to your teamwork in 2015.

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Thanks. the trial separation didn't out so well. missed the bugger--have no idea where he went,
Comment from K. Lorraine
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So far, this contest entry is at the top of the list and a contender to respect. You have a great flair for writing and a real understand of your Muse. I especially like the second to the last sentence, "His last word still sit in my craw like a trapped chicken bone that might kill me." On the other hand, his Muse just might slit his throat. Very entertaining... great piece of writing and good luck.

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2014
    Both your scenarios are dead on perfect if I classified this post honestly. Fiction? I think not.
reply by K. Lorraine on 30-Dec-2014
    Interesting responce...