A Christmas Rescue
A Magical Christmas Tale45 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Yes, definitely put these all these together in a book so it will be easier to find.
I notice a few small errors that need fixing. You might want to go over it again.
Great story. 8-)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Yes, definitely put these all these together in a book so it will be easier to find.
I notice a few small errors that need fixing. You might want to go over it again.
Great story. 8-)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2016
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016
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Yeah, I haven't looked at this for a while. It's two years old and I may rewrite it. All the best G
There's another you may like called 'Times they are a-changing' which features a conversation between Santa & Krampus.
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I saw that. I'll go back. Thanks for telling me.
Comment from Delahay
Sorry, it's not going to happen. People are too attached to their electrical gadgets and no hand made gift would ever replace them.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Sorry, it's not going to happen. People are too attached to their electrical gadgets and no hand made gift would ever replace them.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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You'd be surprised. I have worked with children and young people for over twenty years and in my experience your statement is simply not true!
Many thanks for the review. Much appreciated.
GMG
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Well, I'm certainly glad to be wrong about that.
Comment from happykat4
Very well done. I'm glad the magic came back. The story was delightful. It held the readers attention and ie for one wanted the plan details. The plan was thought out and how to execute it was intriguing. I could picture the characters as dull in color, changing when they thought and spoke about the plan. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Very well done. I'm glad the magic came back. The story was delightful. It held the readers attention and ie for one wanted the plan details. The plan was thought out and how to execute it was intriguing. I could picture the characters as dull in color, changing when they thought and spoke about the plan. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for the great review and brilliant rating. It is very much appreciated. GMG
Comment from William Ross
It's very good, and really shows how Christmas needs to be rescued from big time retailers, bring the magic of Christmas back. Well dome.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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It's very good, and really shows how Christmas needs to be rescued from big time retailers, bring the magic of Christmas back. Well dome.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this, William. Very much appreciated. GMG
Comment from MaBaker
I loved this chapter. I read fantasy so this was great for me. I see also that Christmas Rescue was a winner so you don't really need me talking about how great this story is. Keep writing. Regards MaBaker
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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I loved this chapter. I read fantasy so this was great for me. I see also that Christmas Rescue was a winner so you don't really need me talking about how great this story is. Keep writing. Regards MaBaker
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for your thoughts on this. Much appreciated. GMG
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good story you have penned for Christmas. I really liked the Leprechaun in this story. It was all written so well. Great job. I loved he saw the rainbow. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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This is a very good story you have penned for Christmas. I really liked the Leprechaun in this story. It was all written so well. Great job. I loved he saw the rainbow. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for the great feedback on this Christmas tale. Much appreciated.
Comment from Spiritual Echo
This is an uplifting story that brews good writing with the spirit of the holidays to keep the magic burning.
A very entertaining read.
Merry Christmas/
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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This is an uplifting story that brews good writing with the spirit of the holidays to keep the magic burning.
A very entertaining read.
Merry Christmas/
Comment Written 15-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for the great feedback and fantastic rating, Ingrid. really appreciate that. All the best, G
Comment from Unspoken94
A wonderfully, magical read. The way the
magic returned was so well put together.
I want to read this story to my young grandchildren.
To remind them that magic is still a part of
Christmas. -Bill
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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A wonderfully, magical read. The way the
magic returned was so well put together.
I want to read this story to my young grandchildren.
To remind them that magic is still a part of
Christmas. -Bill
Comment Written 14-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for the great review, Bill. It is truly appreciated. G
Comment from jmdg1954
A great magical Christmas story that should (more appropriately) will delight those of many ages. Comical and magical. I'm surprised I missed this last year.
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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A great magical Christmas story that should (more appropriately) will delight those of many ages. Comical and magical. I'm surprised I missed this last year.
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 14-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Many thanks for catching up with this Christmas tale, john. It is very much appreciated. G
Comment from robyn corum
1.)He used to take such pride in his appearance, but what was the point now(?)
2.) Ye haven't haff let yurself go, big man(,)" (e)xclaimed the Leprechaun
--> is 'haven't haff' what you mean to say? Confusing.
3.) It's starting to affect us all, to be sure(,)" (r)eplied the Leprechaun,
4.) Lad, get over here or I'll take ma shillelagh to ya again(,)" (r)eplied the Leprechaun,
--> seems to be a recurring issue. Remember that the quote AND the speech tag are part of the SAME sentence, and punctuate accordingly. I won't mark anymore of these I may see.
A fun write! I enjoyed reading about Santa and his helpers bringing the magic back!
Let me know if you revise and I will happily re-rate! Thanks!
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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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1.)He used to take such pride in his appearance, but what was the point now(?)
2.) Ye haven't haff let yurself go, big man(,)" (e)xclaimed the Leprechaun
--> is 'haven't haff' what you mean to say? Confusing.
3.) It's starting to affect us all, to be sure(,)" (r)eplied the Leprechaun,
4.) Lad, get over here or I'll take ma shillelagh to ya again(,)" (r)eplied the Leprechaun,
--> seems to be a recurring issue. Remember that the quote AND the speech tag are part of the SAME sentence, and punctuate accordingly. I won't mark anymore of these I may see.
A fun write! I enjoyed reading about Santa and his helpers bringing the magic back!
Let me know if you revise and I will happily re-rate! Thanks!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2015
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Thanks for that Robyn. All the best.
(point 2 is dialect haff is half. It is common usage in Ireland.
G
