Of Mice and Women
Short Story44 total reviews
Comment from amahra
LOL! This was very well written, entertaining, and downright funny. I really enjoyed reading this. Great story and imagination.
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LOL! This was very well written, entertaining, and downright funny. I really enjoyed reading this. Great story and imagination.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
Comment from thee-name
Good story. Could follow writing good.
DASARDLY. IF SOMEONE ASKED ME TO COME UP WITH A WORD TO DESCRIBE MY PLOT, THAT WOULD BE THE WORD.
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Good story. Could follow writing good.
DASARDLY. IF SOMEONE ASKED ME TO COME UP WITH A WORD TO DESCRIBE MY PLOT, THAT WOULD BE THE WORD.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
Comment from mommerry
Your imagination and your writing style were in great shape the day you wrote this piece. I did wonder if the word revulsive should have been repulsive but if you say its a word, I'll accept that. Great job.
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Your imagination and your writing style were in great shape the day you wrote this piece. I did wonder if the word revulsive should have been repulsive but if you say its a word, I'll accept that. Great job.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh, this was just wonderful! There are lots of that type of lady around the world, the ones that have a certain smell under their nose. Now we can go lower! LOL, this was wicked and great fun, lovely it! xsx Sandra
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Oh, this was just wonderful! There are lots of that type of lady around the world, the ones that have a certain smell under their nose. Now we can go lower! LOL, this was wicked and great fun, lovely it! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Well, this is fun and much better(for me at the moment) than a nasty terroist plot. This is perfect. I can see the ladies and hear the screams ...and part of me wishes I could be the one realeasing the wee ones...
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Hi. Well, this is fun and much better(for me at the moment) than a nasty terroist plot. This is perfect. I can see the ladies and hear the screams ...and part of me wishes I could be the one realeasing the wee ones...
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
Mikey, Mikey, you're a naughty boy. (LOL) What an entertaining tale you've penned, and other than using 'revulsive' instead of 'repulsive', saying smiling 'to' me instead of 'at me, I wouldn't change a thing. (Of course those two things were probably intentional. *smile*)
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Mikey, Mikey, you're a naughty boy. (LOL) What an entertaining tale you've penned, and other than using 'revulsive' instead of 'repulsive', saying smiling 'to' me instead of 'at me, I wouldn't change a thing. (Of course those two things were probably intentional. *smile*)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Delightfully wild and wacky. Just when you thought it was over, " release the cats". Leave it to you to come up with a humorous Willard ( you remember that movie, I hope). The nra dude in panties- hilarious. Were you by any chance watching the Three Stooges recently? One of the episodes where the are hired as exterminator?
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Delightfully wild and wacky. Just when you thought it was over, " release the cats". Leave it to you to come up with a humorous Willard ( you remember that movie, I hope). The nra dude in panties- hilarious. Were you by any chance watching the Three Stooges recently? One of the episodes where the are hired as exterminator?
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
Comment from Eric1
Hi Micheal, well you are a surprise my friend, after reading a few of your essays you come up with a wonderful gem of a story. Absolutely loved this hilarious take on a young boys antics, great fun too read and really well written my friend, thank you for sharing.
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Hi Micheal, well you are a surprise my friend, after reading a few of your essays you come up with a wonderful gem of a story. Absolutely loved this hilarious take on a young boys antics, great fun too read and really well written my friend, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
Comment from patcelaw
Geeze I do wish I still had a six. This was so funny and the plot was wonderful Your imagination is classic. Loved the read. Keep writing this funny stuff you are good. Blessings, Patricia
1 typo
I (here) ya'll a hollerin' shouuld be(hear)
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Geeze I do wish I still had a six. This was so funny and the plot was wonderful Your imagination is classic. Loved the read. Keep writing this funny stuff you are good. Blessings, Patricia
1 typo
I (here) ya'll a hollerin' shouuld be(hear)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
Comment from chasennov
"Of Mice and Women" This story you have created here was probably a lot of fun for you to write. It is a hilarious story and I cracked up completely. Have not laughed so much in a decade or more. Well done.
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"Of Mice and Women" This story you have created here was probably a lot of fun for you to write. It is a hilarious story and I cracked up completely. Have not laughed so much in a decade or more. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
