Comment from Joseph W. Sestrich

Exceptional

This poem deserves one great big WOW
I know that you wrote it but I don't know how
All of the people had such imaginative names
That the poem had an ending to me was a shame
Such perfect cadence to every lines rhyme
My reading was metered in foot-tapping time
I'll share with others that they too read
A poem like this is what we all need

It actually deserves a seven
If I could I'd give it eleven

Most enjoyable, a terrifically penned creation.

joe

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Joseph, thanks so much for the lovely rhyming review and the six (or seven, or eleven) stars - you see, once you get into the swing of the rhythm it just comes flowing out.

Steve

Comment from djsaxon

Exceptional

Delightfu write, stacked to the brim with smiley child-friendly images and great allit. Solid aabb rhyme throughout, and a cheeky finish. Loved it.

For there, riding last, on a pint-sized wee pony,
The posh palomino he calls Macaroni,

Random choice from a sea of fun. Cheers - DJ

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks, DJ for the great review and the six stars. Glad you enjoyed.

Steve

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

This is pretty good. I enjoyed it much. Makes me thing when a boy how we all loved it when the circus came to town. Well done. .

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks, Ben - glad you enjoyed.

Steve

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

You have a good story/poem here. Reads smoothly. Nice rhyming throughout. You've captured that circus-like feel. Enjoyable read. Les

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks, Les.

Steve

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh my goodness I laughed and laughed and laughed some more. This was so cute and wonderful. Rhyme and reason were great. flow is good. great job

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Barb, thanks for the great review and especially for reporting the big laugh!

Steve

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I enjoyed your fun and spirit-lifting children's poem. It would be a great one to be illustrated and read to children. The language may be a little too big for children to read (depending on age).
Teresa

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 Comment Written 03-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014

Thanks, Teresa!

Steve