The Gobbledegooks
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Gobbledegooky Fandangle Parade"Children's Fantasy Poems
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Comment from Gladness
Excellent, my friend. I came late to the party, but enjoyed it all the same.
Very well done and lots of fun to read. I hope the story continues with the maid and the prince and gets published for kids (of all ages) to enjoy.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014
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Excellent, my friend. I came late to the party, but enjoyed it all the same.
Very well done and lots of fun to read. I hope the story continues with the maid and the prince and gets published for kids (of all ages) to enjoy.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Anita - glad you enjoyed this piece of fun.
I have three Gobbledegooks poems now and I would like to get them all published as separate picture books - one day I will work out how to go about it!
Steve
Comment from royowen
A fine poem in the tradition of oddly named characters, at a deliciously described parade, you display a very fertile imagination Steve, with this creative work, that conjures up all sorts of images concerning this wonderful world of a colourful presentation. It has a nice rhyming scheme, which is open, quite deliberately I suspect, the alliteration is outstanding, altogether a a beautifully contrived work, well done, blessings, Roy,
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014
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A fine poem in the tradition of oddly named characters, at a deliciously described parade, you display a very fertile imagination Steve, with this creative work, that conjures up all sorts of images concerning this wonderful world of a colourful presentation. It has a nice rhyming scheme, which is open, quite deliberately I suspect, the alliteration is outstanding, altogether a a beautifully contrived work, well done, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Roy. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Steve
Comment from thee-name
Excellent Quatrain poem. Excellent poem for children.
OH, THE GOBBLEDEGOOKS HAVE A PARTY TODAY
ON THE FEAST OF FANDANGLE, LETS WATCH THEM AT PLAY
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Excellent Quatrain poem. Excellent poem for children.
OH, THE GOBBLEDEGOOKS HAVE A PARTY TODAY
ON THE FEAST OF FANDANGLE, LETS WATCH THEM AT PLAY
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the kind words.
Steve
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THANK YOU!
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Steve,
What a delightful read this is for the kiddies and us big kids as well. You've chosen some very clever proximate rhymes which adds to the enjoyment. Well done.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Hi Steve,
What a delightful read this is for the kiddies and us big kids as well. You've chosen some very clever proximate rhymes which adds to the enjoyment. Well done.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Lou. Glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from chasennov
AABB Quatrains "The Gobbledegooky Fandangle Parade" This is a great poem you have created here. I found the structure quite good with a strong sense of formulation. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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AABB Quatrains "The Gobbledegooky Fandangle Parade" This is a great poem you have created here. I found the structure quite good with a strong sense of formulation. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
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You're welcome, Steve.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Steve - This is so much fun to read and gave me a great laugh. Impressive work here my friend and you nailed it. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing,
maureen
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Dear Steve - This is so much fun to read and gave me a great laugh. Impressive work here my friend and you nailed it. Good luck in the contest.
Thanks for sharing,
maureen
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Hi, Maureen.
It gives me a great buzz just to see you back on site, albeit with a different monicker!
Thank you for taking the time to read and review. All the best.
Steve
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
splendid/attended
vexed/next
giraffes/laughs
and many other excellent rhymes!
Clever and thoroughly enjoyable, Steve. Good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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splendid/attended
vexed/next
giraffes/laughs
and many other excellent rhymes!
Clever and thoroughly enjoyable, Steve. Good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Phyllis.
Like you, I enjoy getting into the silly but happy stuff!
Steve
Comment from Lost n Thought
This is a captivating poem! I love that it is silly and tells a complete story, sometimes that is difficult to archive with poetry but you have done it well. Great rhythm and rhyme throughout. A well written piece, great job!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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This is a captivating poem! I love that it is silly and tells a complete story, sometimes that is difficult to archive with poetry but you have done it well. Great rhythm and rhyme throughout. A well written piece, great job!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the lind words - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from nancyjam
This is so much fun to read. Your lines are so cleverly
written and rhymed. The pace is quick and fun and
well suited to the theme.
I'm sure it will do well. Good luck. Nancy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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This is so much fun to read. Your lines are so cleverly
written and rhymed. The pace is quick and fun and
well suited to the theme.
I'm sure it will do well. Good luck. Nancy
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thanks, nancy.
This was fun to write - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Steve,
Well, this was a fun romp through the "Feast of Fandangle". I enjoyed the pageantry you brought to the page.
Loved the imagination used to develop each colorful character and each spectacle they displayed. You projected a nice feeling of excitement through the write that held my attention to the end.
Another solid entry, Steve, best of luck for it's success, Bill
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Hi Steve,
Well, this was a fun romp through the "Feast of Fandangle". I enjoyed the pageantry you brought to the page.
Loved the imagination used to develop each colorful character and each spectacle they displayed. You projected a nice feeling of excitement through the write that held my attention to the end.
Another solid entry, Steve, best of luck for it's success, Bill
Comment Written 05-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Bill.
So glad you enjoyed this bit of fun.
Steve
