Little Poems
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Comment from CR Delport
I think for most humans it is impossible to comprehend how big and expansive the universe is. We look at things around us and it is hard to fathom all that space. This is well done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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I think for most humans it is impossible to comprehend how big and expansive the universe is. We look at things around us and it is hard to fathom all that space. This is well done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you CR. Yes, very hard to comprehend
Comment from DavidVea
I really love the structure of this poem and the enthusiastic way you present the subject. I too stare in wonder at the marvels of the night sky and you capture that feeling very well. This is one of my favorite pieces since I joined this site. That you for sharing it! I'm David.
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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I really love the structure of this poem and the enthusiastic way you present the subject. I too stare in wonder at the marvels of the night sky and you capture that feeling very well. This is one of my favorite pieces since I joined this site. That you for sharing it! I'm David.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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Thank you David for your input.
Comment from adewpearl
canzone, a new form for me - very interesting
good use of enjambment
nice opening alliteration in sky spreads and in other phrases like cosmic constructions
vivid descriptive detail
effective use of the form's repeated lines
Brooke
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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canzone, a new form for me - very interesting
good use of enjambment
nice opening alliteration in sky spreads and in other phrases like cosmic constructions
vivid descriptive detail
effective use of the form's repeated lines
Brooke
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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Thank you Brooke. Im glad you liked it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Tom, I love it. The sky, the stars, the whole vast universe has always fascinated me. How I wish I could be a spacewoman, soaring through the amazing universe of such beauty. I love this poem and the style too, you have really brought the whole of this poem to life, the imagery, the rhyme and this wonderful rhythm, can't really tell you what I felt and thought, just that it is brilliant! Well done, Tom. xsx Sandra
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Tom, I love it. The sky, the stars, the whole vast universe has always fascinated me. How I wish I could be a spacewoman, soaring through the amazing universe of such beauty. I love this poem and the style too, you have really brought the whole of this poem to life, the imagery, the rhyme and this wonderful rhythm, can't really tell you what I felt and thought, just that it is brilliant! Well done, Tom. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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Thank you Sandra, I'm blushing. Love those stars you added to my cosmos.
Comment from rod007
I am learning new poetic forms at the present time, but this one is too complex for me so I'll just appreciate it. I especially liked these lines:
"Those cosmic constructions show beauty and grace,
as the planets, the moon, and stars interlace
in visions that only the clouds can displace."
Well done, Tom.
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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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I am learning new poetic forms at the present time, but this one is too complex for me so I'll just appreciate it. I especially liked these lines:
"Those cosmic constructions show beauty and grace,
as the planets, the moon, and stars interlace
in visions that only the clouds can displace."
Well done, Tom.
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Comment Written 02-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2014
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Thank you rod. Never hurts to keep it simple too. I just like the challenge.
