Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 194 "Cosmos Considerations"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from patcelaw
Our universe is so big that i am in total awe of the way it is held together and the design of it all. There was not a big bang that put this all together, there had to be creative design, by a great designer, the greatest of all designers. Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Our universe is so big that i am in total awe of the way it is held together and the design of it all. There was not a big bang that put this all together, there had to be creative design, by a great designer, the greatest of all designers. Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you Patcelaw. Yup, there just had to be.
Comment from Nosha17
The Universe is quite fantastic, I agree, and we do stand in awe of it all when we perceive the sky and the visible stars and planets. My daughter works for NASA so I follow avidly her activities-she is an Aerospace Engineer. You have made good use of rhyming, descriptive language and imagery to convey your thought. I enjoyed reading your informative notes, also. Faye
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The Universe is quite fantastic, I agree, and we do stand in awe of it all when we perceive the sky and the visible stars and planets. My daughter works for NASA so I follow avidly her activities-she is an Aerospace Engineer. You have made good use of rhyming, descriptive language and imagery to convey your thought. I enjoyed reading your informative notes, also. Faye
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you Faye. That must be exciting to follow her work. I appreciate this review. I'm so glad you finally were able to review.
Comment from Chikara
The imagery in your piece is beautiful; one can easily and fully imagine a starry night, insomuch as to delve further, and imagine the sun, planets and galaxies around us. Your concise wording allows imagination to flow and expand like the universe your write of, and your color is cleverly made to resemble stars on a black sky.
The piece drips with humility and the feeling of utter insignificance of us relative to the entirety of the cosmos, and your adoration and emotion of the universe hangs on every word.
Thank you as well for introducing me to a form of poetry that's new to me.
Wonderful work.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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The imagery in your piece is beautiful; one can easily and fully imagine a starry night, insomuch as to delve further, and imagine the sun, planets and galaxies around us. Your concise wording allows imagination to flow and expand like the universe your write of, and your color is cleverly made to resemble stars on a black sky.
The piece drips with humility and the feeling of utter insignificance of us relative to the entirety of the cosmos, and your adoration and emotion of the universe hangs on every word.
Thank you as well for introducing me to a form of poetry that's new to me.
Wonderful work.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you knihtsuj. Your words are very touching. I appreciate your review very much.
Comment from amahra
Only a great poet can look up into the sky and pen or key such magnificent words. Loved you work choice and also the beautiful art work you chose for this writing.
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Only a great poet can look up into the sky and pen or key such magnificent words. Loved you work choice and also the beautiful art work you chose for this writing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you for the wonderful review and sweet compliment.
Comment from Dawn Munro
First, let me assure you, I am out of sixes, or this most certainly would have one - it speaks to my most intimate thoughts directly, as if your muse somehow expressed my feelings about the cosmos, poet - seriously.
It is simply exquisite.
*************************!!! EXCEPTIONAL
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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First, let me assure you, I am out of sixes, or this most certainly would have one - it speaks to my most intimate thoughts directly, as if your muse somehow expressed my feelings about the cosmos, poet - seriously.
It is simply exquisite.
*************************!!! EXCEPTIONAL
Comment Written 04-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you Ideasaregems. I am very glad that we connected on this one so strongly.
Comment from Glasstruth
The universe is an endless frontier. What we know is still at its beginning stages. You've captured the unknown beautifully with alliteration and rhyming that's as smooth as viewing night time stars. Wonderfully written. Les
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The universe is an endless frontier. What we know is still at its beginning stages. You've captured the unknown beautifully with alliteration and rhyming that's as smooth as viewing night time stars. Wonderfully written. Les
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much Les. Indeed
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
There is just something about looking up at the stars and the moon. My dad and I use to look at the moon and try to figure out what the moon looked like. Something so simple yet we always had different ideas. It was always fun. Great job friend
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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There is just something about looking up at the stars and the moon. My dad and I use to look at the moon and try to figure out what the moon looked like. Something so simple yet we always had different ideas. It was always fun. Great job friend
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you for a good review.
Comment from butterfly4265
We truly have no concept of the depth and vastness of our skies and universe. You epitomized that with the lines:
"I delight in the mystery of it all
and ponder the moments of light that may fall
on this pitiful person who sits (on?) a wall
while some comet tails blaze just off to my right"
This is very well written and powerful with excellent flow, rhyming and imagery. Very much enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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We truly have no concept of the depth and vastness of our skies and universe. You epitomized that with the lines:
"I delight in the mystery of it all
and ponder the moments of light that may fall
on this pitiful person who sits (on?) a wall
while some comet tails blaze just off to my right"
This is very well written and powerful with excellent flow, rhyming and imagery. Very much enjoyed and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you butterfly. Glad you enjoyed it
Comment from fastdigits
A fascinating walk on the dark side
of the moon when only the glimmer
of a far flung star lights up the sky
and as you say the sky spreads before
you in a blanket of light.
Well done
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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A fascinating walk on the dark side
of the moon when only the glimmer
of a far flung star lights up the sky
and as you say the sky spreads before
you in a blanket of light.
Well done
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you fastdigits. Thanks for taking the journey with me.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, treishcel, you did an excellent job portraying the beauty of the universe, great imagery you presented through your words. I enjoyed reading it. I don't like this new format. I like when you can look at the top paying writes and the recognized writes.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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this is an excellent write, treishcel, you did an excellent job portraying the beauty of the universe, great imagery you presented through your words. I enjoyed reading it. I don't like this new format. I like when you can look at the top paying writes and the recognized writes.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you sweetwoodjax. Yes, it's taking me a while to get used to it.
