Elf Gets A Gift
A children's Christmas story4 total reviews
Comment from K. Lorraine
This Christmas story had a wonderful message that young and old alike can learn from it. This story was touching and very well written. It would be a wonderful story to read on Christmas Eve to children and grandchildren as they drift off to sleep awaiting for Santa's arrival. I enjoyed the story very much and good luck in the contest. Cute artwork too!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
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This Christmas story had a wonderful message that young and old alike can learn from it. This story was touching and very well written. It would be a wonderful story to read on Christmas Eve to children and grandchildren as they drift off to sleep awaiting for Santa's arrival. I enjoyed the story very much and good luck in the contest. Cute artwork too!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for your encouraging remarks. It means a lot to me that you said my story was touching and
well written.
Comment from bob cullen
Your writing is very good. And the story is simply fantastic. It really does tell the story of Christmas. It's simple, it's delightful and it's so easy to read. I hope every grandparent reads it to their grand kids.
I don't think I've ever read a nicer Christmas story
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
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Your writing is very good. And the story is simply fantastic. It really does tell the story of Christmas. It's simple, it's delightful and it's so easy to read. I hope every grandparent reads it to their grand kids.
I don't think I've ever read a nicer Christmas story
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2014
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You have given me encouragement to keep on writing. I am happy you found it to be simple and delightful.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Mia,
Lovely story of learning how rewarding it is to give, and not always receive.
Nice teaching story as well. Nicely told and presented.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*,*)
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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Hi, Mia,
Lovely story of learning how rewarding it is to give, and not always receive.
Nice teaching story as well. Nicely told and presented.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*,*)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your review. I like your comment, "nice
teaching story." I'm a retired kindergarten/first grade
teacher. I guess I'll always be a teacher at heart. Thanks.
Comment from country ranch writer
WE HAVE ALL BEEN TAUGHT FROM THE MINUTE WE STARTED TALKING AND WALKING IT IS BETTER TO GIVE THAN TO RECEIVE. BUT MORE THAN EVER IN TODAY'S WORLD THIS HAS BEEN FORGOTTEN BECAUSE IT IS FILLED WITH SO MUCH GREED
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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WE HAVE ALL BEEN TAUGHT FROM THE MINUTE WE STARTED TALKING AND WALKING IT IS BETTER TO GIVE THAN TO RECEIVE. BUT MORE THAN EVER IN TODAY'S WORLD THIS HAS BEEN FORGOTTEN BECAUSE IT IS FILLED WITH SO MUCH GREED
Comment Written 01-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2014
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Thank you for your comments. How right you are. The world
is full of greed. We all need to be reminded there is
joy in giving.
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Good luck with that one start in Washington and work down
