Believe
A poem about believing again.16 total reviews
Comment from Glasstruth
Nice play on words. Woven beautifully around you and your past. Nice flow and rhythm throughout. Having faith in yourself is where it's at. Wonderfully written. Les
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Nice play on words. Woven beautifully around you and your past. Nice flow and rhythm throughout. Having faith in yourself is where it's at. Wonderfully written. Les
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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Thank you!! Very much appreciated!!! :)
Comment from patcelaw
This poem I can so very well identify with as it is almost like you are telling my story. We are a generation apart, but we booth have been through so many things in common. Blessings, Pat
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This poem I can so very well identify with as it is almost like you are telling my story. We are a generation apart, but we booth have been through so many things in common. Blessings, Pat
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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I know, right?!? It's so weird/cool at the same time!!! Thanks for reviewing (as always!)!!! :) <3 Jill
Comment from crzypnter
Oh how we look back at our lives from childhood to present. The things we would of done differently or not that has moulded us into who we are today. To those of us that never stopped dreaming the dream to become who are. Job well done!!
August
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Oh how we look back at our lives from childhood to present. The things we would of done differently or not that has moulded us into who we are today. To those of us that never stopped dreaming the dream to become who are. Job well done!!
August
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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THANK YOU SOOOOOOOO MUCH!!! :)
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Your very welcome
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:)
Comment from granny goes viral
Well done, also I agree with the message. Loved the last concluding verse. Simply written, simply stated, yet complex with meaning.
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Well done, also I agree with the message. Loved the last concluding verse. Simply written, simply stated, yet complex with meaning.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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Thank you - much appreciated!! :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
"If I had the chance to change it though,
I would probably choose to leave it be.
Without every last bit that I lived of it,
I would have ended up anyone but me." -- JPilcher
The above stanza summed up your wonderfully written and well rhymed poem on self-discovery and awareness quite beautifully, JPilcher.
Excellent rhyming and meter all throughout, and the last two lines of your poem add an exclamation mark to your message. If we could do it all over again, knowing what we know now...would we?
I wouldn't! :}
Great writing, and beautifully presented...
~Dean
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"If I had the chance to change it though,
I would probably choose to leave it be.
Without every last bit that I lived of it,
I would have ended up anyone but me." -- JPilcher
The above stanza summed up your wonderfully written and well rhymed poem on self-discovery and awareness quite beautifully, JPilcher.
Excellent rhyming and meter all throughout, and the last two lines of your poem add an exclamation mark to your message. If we could do it all over again, knowing what we know now...would we?
I wouldn't! :}
Great writing, and beautifully presented...
~Dean
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2014
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Thanks Dean!! Very much appreciated!!! :)
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It was entirely my pleasure. :}
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Good!! LOL!! ;)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Jill,
This is penned so well, with a refreshing take on what is to believe in oneself after coming through a difficult or adverse time.
Faith is the key. Nicely presented as well. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
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Hi, Jill,
This is penned so well, with a refreshing take on what is to believe in oneself after coming through a difficult or adverse time.
Faith is the key. Nicely presented as well. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
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Comment Written 30-Nov-2014
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Thank you - much appreciated!! :)
