Book Promo: Two Tattered Hearts
A story of a young mother's fight out of an abusive marriage47 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
How true this all is. Love to read this is it an e-book on Kindle or something? I have an app on here to read kindle bvooks from Amazon. I wonder if you could help me with publishing on Amazon? Details how and if I can do E-books for some. I have put one of my collections of poems Essays and stuff "Geoffrey's Musings, if you are interested.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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How true this all is. Love to read this is it an e-book on Kindle or something? I have an app on here to read kindle bvooks from Amazon. I wonder if you could help me with publishing on Amazon? Details how and if I can do E-books for some. I have put one of my collections of poems Essays and stuff "Geoffrey's Musings, if you are interested.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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It is on kindle on Amazon. I went through publisher. I am not computer suave enough to do it myself. I have heard smashword gives tutorials on how to do it. Thank you for the kind review.
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I am trying to get your book down loaded I wanted to pay for the Kindle version but having problems. I have an app opn my PC for reading Kindle stuff.
Comment from Genya
This was so sad to read. I nearly had to stop reading it as things like this upset me deeply. So well written. Each word was so strong and powerful. When he went, I felt myself relaxing a little. Then when he came back I could feel the tension in my own body. I have never read this story before. I can see why you entered the contest with this. You certainly have 'a lot to brag about'. Genya
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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This was so sad to read. I nearly had to stop reading it as things like this upset me deeply. So well written. Each word was so strong and powerful. When he went, I felt myself relaxing a little. Then when he came back I could feel the tension in my own body. I have never read this story before. I can see why you entered the contest with this. You certainly have 'a lot to brag about'. Genya
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sasha
This is excellent and does a terrific job pulling the reader into the story and wanting to know more. I found two small nits you may (or may not) want to look at. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
{Bobby...remove the {...
Bobby threw her into the wall...I think 'against' the wall would sound better...
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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This is excellent and does a terrific job pulling the reader into the story and wanting to know more. I found two small nits you may (or may not) want to look at. Great entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
{Bobby...remove the {...
Bobby threw her into the wall...I think 'against' the wall would sound better...
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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I will fix them. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
You explain the premise of the novel well and have chosen an excerpt that captures the essence of this toxic relationship in a dramatic way that should draw readers in to want to read more.
You sell your book well in this contest "brag" entry - it's a story well worth promoting :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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You explain the premise of the novel well and have chosen an excerpt that captures the essence of this toxic relationship in a dramatic way that should draw readers in to want to read more.
You sell your book well in this contest "brag" entry - it's a story well worth promoting :-) Brooke
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you for your continued support. I always appreciate your comments.
Comment from Drew Delaney
This hits home for sure. It's a tale that will never end, I don't suppose. The tale of wife beating and abuse. My story which is on still called Evermore, is a short story about the after effects. It's my story written in just a little over a thousand words. If you have a chance, I hope ot get your opinion, since you are a published author. thanks so much.
Great job in bringing the reader in. A story that I wish young eyes and ears would listen to
Drew Delaney
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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This hits home for sure. It's a tale that will never end, I don't suppose. The tale of wife beating and abuse. My story which is on still called Evermore, is a short story about the after effects. It's my story written in just a little over a thousand words. If you have a chance, I hope ot get your opinion, since you are a published author. thanks so much.
Great job in bringing the reader in. A story that I wish young eyes and ears would listen to
Drew Delaney
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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I wish so too. Many times the abuse starting when dating. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from seaglass
This sounds like an interesting and relevant book. Is it on Amazon? I live in a tiny apartment so I only buy what I can download to me kindle. If so I read it and review. Did you do the cover art?
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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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This sounds like an interesting and relevant book. Is it on Amazon? I live in a tiny apartment so I only buy what I can download to me kindle. If so I read it and review. Did you do the cover art?
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Yes, it is on Amazon as an e-book. G and J Publishing did the cover art, but I got to choose it. If you read the book, you will see why I chose those flowers. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
An interesting story-line. What woman would choose to be with this beast. Having read your novel on Fan Story, I know you have an exciting book. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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An interesting story-line. What woman would choose to be with this beast. Having read your novel on Fan Story, I know you have an exciting book. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
