Hot Mess
Just a fun poem about all sorts of messes! ;)47 total reviews
Comment from billmetz
This poem should be one of the best in the contest. I like the message and the verses. The rhymes are not all uniformed, but what the heck. I like it. Wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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This poem should be one of the best in the contest. I like the message and the verses. The rhymes are not all uniformed, but what the heck. I like it. Wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
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Awwweeee!! Thank you!!! :)
Comment from Ekim777
I reckon messes don't just happen. They are carefully contrived. Just as a carefully built structure of a life or a or world just begs to be destroyed. By the time we reach the final verse we are still left wondering. Is man capable of creating an all embracing mess. Good news is with us. We are not capable of total destruction. Everything can be transformed. -Ekim777
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I reckon messes don't just happen. They are carefully contrived. Just as a carefully built structure of a life or a or world just begs to be destroyed. By the time we reach the final verse we are still left wondering. Is man capable of creating an all embracing mess. Good news is with us. We are not capable of total destruction. Everything can be transformed. -Ekim777
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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:) Thanks for the review!!
Comment from livelylinda
Author: fun poem, good rhyme, picture and colors. The rhyme and repeating words reminded me of reading a Dr. Seuss book; such fun. Good luck with the contest. livelylinda
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Author: fun poem, good rhyme, picture and colors. The rhyme and repeating words reminded me of reading a Dr. Seuss book; such fun. Good luck with the contest. livelylinda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
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That's exactly what my daughter said!! Thanks for the review!!! :)
Comment from skye
Messes are such a problem, whether self-imposed or given to us. Your rhymes are consistent, they describe messes that accost us daily.
Excellent.
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Messes are such a problem, whether self-imposed or given to us. Your rhymes are consistent, they describe messes that accost us daily.
Excellent.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review! Much appreciated!! :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
Some messes we create ourselves, other times they just land at your feet. I like your entry for the contest:) Good luck.
Teresa
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Some messes we create ourselves, other times they just land at your feet. I like your entry for the contest:) Good luck.
Teresa
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review! Much appreciated!! :)
Comment from Ben Colder
You are a mess, poet. The pen glides along with hot stuff and messes attributes. Good luck in the contest. What a mess of a contest. LOL.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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You are a mess, poet. The pen glides along with hot stuff and messes attributes. Good luck in the contest. What a mess of a contest. LOL.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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LOLOLOL!! Thanks for reading my very hot mess!! ;)
Comment from Jackarrie
A great entry into the contest of What a Mess. You have produced a fantastic poem of great rhyming stanzas. I can identify with making messes I am know for it.
Well done, good luck in the contest. sorry no six. Mary
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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A great entry into the contest of What a Mess. You have produced a fantastic poem of great rhyming stanzas. I can identify with making messes I am know for it.
Well done, good luck in the contest. sorry no six. Mary
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review! Much appreciated!!
Comment from robina1978
I can't believe that this is really your hat but it complements your messy poem extremely well. Your poem is all about mess and what it does to you. I will have a difficult choice tomorrow. Best wishes for the prompt.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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I can't believe that this is really your hat but it complements your messy poem extremely well. Your poem is all about mess and what it does to you. I will have a difficult choice tomorrow. Best wishes for the prompt.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
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It's totally my hat!! I can even prove it after the contest!! ;) Thanks for the review!!! :)
Comment from Kingsland
Your poem is a mess of words that is poetically very strongly written. I just had to say that. I really enjoyed reading this well written piece of poetic art... John
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Your poem is a mess of words that is poetically very strongly written. I just had to say that. I really enjoyed reading this well written piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
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Wow!! Thank you!!!
Comment from Bill Schott
I see you are part of a contest and this entry is a cool. one. The entire poem about the messes quickly reads to the last stanza where we see the speaker is the quintessential mess. Nice.
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I see you are part of a contest and this entry is a cool. one. The entire poem about the messes quickly reads to the last stanza where we see the speaker is the quintessential mess. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thanks for the review! Much appreciated!! :)
