Little Poems
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Comment from RGstar
As usual, the master of structures, my friend. This time light is used as your thesis. Great author's notes.
Good write.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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As usual, the master of structures, my friend. This time light is used as your thesis. Great author's notes.
Good write.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you RG
Comment from Joan E.
I enjoyed your reflections (pun intended) about electricity and enlightenment. Your rhyme scheme and photograph complement the tone well. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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I enjoyed your reflections (pun intended) about electricity and enlightenment. Your rhyme scheme and photograph complement the tone well. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you Joan.
Comment from rod007
This poetic style suits the theme of your poem about that miraculous invention--electricity. With gas as its partner it moves the world, sometimes to good and sometimes to bad. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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This poetic style suits the theme of your poem about that miraculous invention--electricity. With gas as its partner it moves the world, sometimes to good and sometimes to bad. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thanks again rod and Happy Thanksgiving to you
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Once again your command of poetic forms shines brightly.
A rather boring topic has been held up to the light(Sorry!Lol.) and allowed to glow with the unique creativity which created it.
The style seems complex but has , yet again, been perfected here.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Once again your command of poetic forms shines brightly.
A rather boring topic has been held up to the light(Sorry!Lol.) and allowed to glow with the unique creativity which created it.
The style seems complex but has , yet again, been perfected here.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you Shirley. I blush with appreciation.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Where would we be without it now! Our lives have become so dependent on it, and yet it isn't that long ago we had to live without gas and electricity. Candles everywhere. So for just a few short years, we have lived the lives of luxury, yet the preceding few hundred thousand years there was nothing and people still survived. Interesting that! This is a great poem, Tom, with lots to think about. xsx sandra
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Where would we be without it now! Our lives have become so dependent on it, and yet it isn't that long ago we had to live without gas and electricity. Candles everywhere. So for just a few short years, we have lived the lives of luxury, yet the preceding few hundred thousand years there was nothing and people still survived. Interesting that! This is a great poem, Tom, with lots to think about. xsx sandra
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you sandrafor your thoughtful review.
Comment from CR Delport
If one thinks how humankind had evolved and how our lives had changed the last 100 years, one can't even imagine what the next 100 years would be like. A pity we won't see it. This is well done.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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If one thinks how humankind had evolved and how our lives had changed the last 100 years, one can't even imagine what the next 100 years would be like. A pity we won't see it. This is well done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you CR. Appreciate the review, and yes, hard to imagine.
