Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Rastavius Returns"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from seaglass
GEEEEEZ, these guys should work for the FBI. Love the picture, its pure evil. This was very well written, I almost broke out in a sweat as the tension built in the cross examination. Good writing.
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GEEEEEZ, these guys should work for the FBI. Love the picture, its pure evil. This was very well written, I almost broke out in a sweat as the tension built in the cross examination. Good writing.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Wow! What a gruesome image. The Oracle. That sounds like an important figure. I like the tittle. He must have powers. With a supernatural name like that. Good job on finding the perfect image for the Oracle. I would not muck with him, judging by his appearance and statue. A prominant powerful man I would speculate. This chapter looks professionally written. Obviously, you ain't foolin' around. i can tell that you really enjoy writing this novel. That makes it much easier if you truly love the work you are doing. I can discern that you are getting engaged with the plot and introducing a new face. I can remember ons of faces. The more, the merriewr in my book. I love lots of characters that interact with one another. I thouroughly enjoyed this unit. Was smooth and I'm getting the language down. The author notes are key to remembering faces. i see no obvious SPAG errors. I could not even spell Sharon correctly. Letters blend together like a stew, sometimes. This is killer material. Very satisfied. Count your doubloon, Sir Cahill. Look above... there are six nukes inbound for the LA metropolitan area. I hope them stars help. Lol! do loco
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Wow! What a gruesome image. The Oracle. That sounds like an important figure. I like the tittle. He must have powers. With a supernatural name like that. Good job on finding the perfect image for the Oracle. I would not muck with him, judging by his appearance and statue. A prominant powerful man I would speculate. This chapter looks professionally written. Obviously, you ain't foolin' around. i can tell that you really enjoy writing this novel. That makes it much easier if you truly love the work you are doing. I can discern that you are getting engaged with the plot and introducing a new face. I can remember ons of faces. The more, the merriewr in my book. I love lots of characters that interact with one another. I thouroughly enjoyed this unit. Was smooth and I'm getting the language down. The author notes are key to remembering faces. i see no obvious SPAG errors. I could not even spell Sharon correctly. Letters blend together like a stew, sometimes. This is killer material. Very satisfied. Count your doubloon, Sir Cahill. Look above... there are six nukes inbound for the LA metropolitan area. I hope them stars help. Lol! do loco
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
Comment from flylikeaneagle
The priests are getting creepy instead of being holy. I like how Cassius wants to warn his sister and the others. Well written. Maybe the wolves will bite their butts and chase the priests away. Throw some holy water on those priests...ok, keep writing. Happy Thanksgiving.
flylikeaneagle
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The priests are getting creepy instead of being holy. I like how Cassius wants to warn his sister and the others. Well written. Maybe the wolves will bite their butts and chase the priests away. Throw some holy water on those priests...ok, keep writing. Happy Thanksgiving.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
I read your notes. I can see why you love this story, Mikey. The characters seem to have taken on a life of their own, and I'll bet they seem to speak their lines into your ears, right?
Great job, as usual.
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I read your notes. I can see why you love this story, Mikey. The characters seem to have taken on a life of their own, and I'll bet they seem to speak their lines into your ears, right?
Great job, as usual.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
Comment from Nosha17
The characterisations of these evil priests are great, I hate them already! Excellent intrigue and story line, it is a real adventure. Most enjoyable. Happy Thanksgiving. Faye
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The characterisations of these evil priests are great, I hate them already! Excellent intrigue and story line, it is a real adventure. Most enjoyable. Happy Thanksgiving. Faye
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
Comment from Sankey
Really felt the urgency of this and I was affected by the drama and the apostasy of these evil people. Very real mate and I can't help but feel we are surrounded by these even in the form of ISIS and co. Well written.Hope we are gonna see Leopold and Rastavius get their just desserts even some of the knives they would apply to others. One little spag...Cassius looked up at Leopold who star(-r)ed steely-eyed at him.
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Really felt the urgency of this and I was affected by the drama and the apostasy of these evil people. Very real mate and I can't help but feel we are surrounded by these even in the form of ISIS and co. Well written.Hope we are gonna see Leopold and Rastavius get their just desserts even some of the knives they would apply to others. One little spag...Cassius looked up at Leopold who star(-r)ed steely-eyed at him.
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Comment Written 25-Nov-2014
