Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Exceptional

OK OK I gotta part with one of my 6's on this one. It was funny as well as creative. I read it OVA and Ova and was smiling each time I read it
TK

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014

Thank you, TK, for the terrific review and generous award. Bill

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

great pairing of photo and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I'm still laughing over the word play in ova and ova/ over and over :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thank you, Brooke, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah-ha! Very nice play on words in this witty little 5-7-5 on at least a couple of key elements pertaining to human creation, Bill. I could read it ova and ova again, heh...heh. Okay, so it wasn't as funny as when you said it...

Good stuff! :)

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you, Dean, for reviewing this. The picture is of Houdini who had escaped a condom.

reply by Dean Kuch on 23-Nov-2014

So, he was pretty adept at escaping things, even then. Interesting...

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Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

I very rarely read let alone rate these three liners. I guess I'm neither smart enough nor sensitive enough to understand them.

This one however really tickled my fancy. It didn't go ove my head

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you, Bob, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

It only take one, and sometimes that one happens at the wrong time. LOL I remember the doctor telling me it would take me a few months to get pregnant after I got married. Nine months later, my daughter was born.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

I remember when my son first asked why his parent's 18th anniversary occurred seven months before his 18th birthday. I'm glad it took that long to ask.

reply by lindalcreel on 24-Nov-2014

Not going there. LOL

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

Thanks for sharing "'s permanent" with us.
This was whimsically succinct, a kaleidoscope of nature. Your progression sets us up than backs it up with a succession of literary delights: Then you hit us with a humorous conclusion! "ova and ova"

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you, Doctor, for the kind review. Bill

reply by Dr. Nad on 22-Nov-2014

You are very welcome, Embrace the Love from above!

Comment from sibhus

Excellent

Ha, ha, wha a witty little poem. this really is quite a clever little piece that is so inventive. It also gives you a moment to think about the whole act of creation. A really good poem.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Lol how punny!!!! I understand your title now I've read your funny little poem Bill. Ova and ova!!! Very good. Thanks for the chuckle.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you, Wendy, for the kind review. Bill