Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

I love the phrase, "tangerine sky". Wonderfully descriptive and perfect for your photo. This poem is particularly well written. "Nearest to shades of campfire flame." Super!

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2014

Thank you, glad you likes it.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

The unity of nature with living things creates an artistic blend that is amazing, hence these lines were magnificent:
"Night birds are singing out their last lullabies,
Giving voice in the soft evening breeze."
Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you rod. Wonderful review.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Good luck in the competition. Nice imagery projected here. Nice image and colour to depict the aura of autumn.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you RG.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Well-penned dedication--lovely acrostic to setting sun;
Good visual imagery complements the stunning photography;
"tangerine sky":
"tree branches shown in dark silhouette";
Nice audio:
"Night birds are singing our their last lullabies";
So many abundant sights and sounds to complete our day in nature's wondrous ways.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014

Thank you Margaret. I dig your acessment.

reply by Capricorn30 on 22-Nov-2014

You're welcome:)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

You are so prescient--we had a bit of a tangerine sky tonight! Your acrostic is so seamless, I might have missed the form without the top note--your maintaining the alternating rhymes was quite an accomplishment. As usual, your photograph is stunning. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thank you Joan. Your observation made my day.

reply by Joan E. on 22-Nov-2014

More smiles and sweet dreams. I hope tomorrow is another great day! -Joan

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

A beautiful and graceful acrostic Tom. Filled with all I love, nature at its best. Good luck in the contest my friend and thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thank you Maureen. I look forward to the day you can walk again in nature at you Bon Echo home.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That is such a lovely acrostic, Tom, your rhyme is so smooth, which is very hard to do when you are limited to using one letter to start with. Your photo is so beautiful too, rhyme and photo, perfect. Good luck in the contest! xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thank you Sandra. I never do well, but i still try. Thanks for the kind words and support.

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Another of one your gems using a format that I always try and avoid. Your rhyme scheme is right on. I enjoyed this Tangerine Sky a lot.
TK

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thank again Sir T

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The author's words are filled with color,
beauty and description. The artwork captures this amazing sky well and compliments the theme of this poem.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thank you harmony.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This acrostic is smooth in the flow of its words. The presentation is outstanding. I wish you the best of luck in the contest, Blessings, Patricia.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2014

Thank you Pat, for the review and best wishes.