Color-Bind
A rogue poem of sorts53 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Oh Rovo you're a naughty boy
This back and forth, the hen's enjoy
But you were just our "little" toy
in spite of your belief
A self appointed raging bull
A bucking stallion brimming full
A cock for all us hens to pull
What ego mate, good grief!
You think you spurned? You should have learned
Most legs were crossed and backs were turned
Inspite of title you had earned
You barely gave relief
There wasn't any ecstasy
You've got your hand confused with me
I can't express this tactfully
No Cock will be MY Chief
So...
I do not need a farewell kiss
Or any goddamned more of this
I know I'd rather take the piss
Go pump that Texas beef!
All in fun, hun.
LOL
Great stuff. Nice to see you back. I'm sick of reading crap.
BTW I'm just keeping in theme with the banter canter.
Let me lay some six on you haha
P
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Oh Rovo you're a naughty boy
This back and forth, the hen's enjoy
But you were just our "little" toy
in spite of your belief
A self appointed raging bull
A bucking stallion brimming full
A cock for all us hens to pull
What ego mate, good grief!
You think you spurned? You should have learned
Most legs were crossed and backs were turned
Inspite of title you had earned
You barely gave relief
There wasn't any ecstasy
You've got your hand confused with me
I can't express this tactfully
No Cock will be MY Chief
So...
I do not need a farewell kiss
Or any goddamned more of this
I know I'd rather take the piss
Go pump that Texas beef!
All in fun, hun.
LOL
Great stuff. Nice to see you back. I'm sick of reading crap.
BTW I'm just keeping in theme with the banter canter.
Let me lay some six on you haha
P
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
Comment from Bryana
Hi my dear Rogue! So wonderful
to see you back, there's no other
rogue like you.
You came back with a beautiful poem,
I love it...
I love these lines...
But bless your hearts for all the darts
You've aimed and launched my way.
I hope your father is fine. Hus
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Hi my dear Rogue! So wonderful
to see you back, there's no other
rogue like you.
You came back with a beautiful poem,
I love it...
I love these lines...
But bless your hearts for all the darts
You've aimed and launched my way.
I hope your father is fine. Hus
Comment Written 18-Nov-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Marillion Rogue David...you are back.....yay
Such a great thing to see....well written black and blue ...and white...it is well red. And made me green....and smile and yell-o He's back
God bless
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Marillion Rogue David...you are back.....yay
Such a great thing to see....well written black and blue ...and white...it is well red. And made me green....and smile and yell-o He's back
God bless
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from flamingstar
Oh, that was great. Spoken like a true rogue, although it's usually the men who only see and think in black and white while us females process everything in shades of gray - my experience, anyway. An arresting write.
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Oh, that was great. Spoken like a true rogue, although it's usually the men who only see and think in black and white while us females process everything in shades of gray - my experience, anyway. An arresting write.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from SteveY
Great job with this one. Glad that you wrote it for all of us to ponder and enjoy. Love the message of seeing in black and white and grey.
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Great job with this one. Glad that you wrote it for all of us to ponder and enjoy. Love the message of seeing in black and white and grey.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from Max Edon
I loved the mystery of this poem. I wasn't quite sure what this poem was about. It was so dark, I thought it might be about a serial killer.
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I loved the mystery of this poem. I wasn't quite sure what this poem was about. It was so dark, I thought it might be about a serial killer.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from c_lucas
When checking out colors, look at the aura. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
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When checking out colors, look at the aura. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from butterfly4265
I have certainly encountered my fair share of "men of gray" in my time.
I love it when inspiration just suddenly appears out of nowhere you and you just have to write it all down! The rhyming and flow are both excellent, with a strong and clear message. Very well written and much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.
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I have certainly encountered my fair share of "men of gray" in my time.
I love it when inspiration just suddenly appears out of nowhere you and you just have to write it all down! The rhyming and flow are both excellent, with a strong and clear message. Very well written and much enjoyed. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from Eric1
Hi David, great to have you back my friend, I wish I could write beautiful poems like this out of the blue, your presentation is stunning, as are the rhyme and the rhythm, the flow is exquisite, a wonderful poem all round.
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Hi David, great to have you back my friend, I wish I could write beautiful poems like this out of the blue, your presentation is stunning, as are the rhyme and the rhythm, the flow is exquisite, a wonderful poem all round.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. Romantic writing danced.
A PROPER ROGUE WOULD BE REMISS
IN PASSING UP A FAREWELL KISS
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Excellent poem. Romantic writing danced.
A PROPER ROGUE WOULD BE REMISS
IN PASSING UP A FAREWELL KISS
Comment Written 17-Nov-2014