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Comment from Joan E.
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Your tribute was especially meaningful to me because my husband and I celebrated our 43rd anniversary in September. I enjoyed your Quatern, repeating line and rhyme scheme. Here's to many, many happy returns of your special day! -Joan

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 17-Nov-2014
    Ihank you Joan. Congrats on your aniversary too.
reply by Joan E. on 17-Nov-2014
    We four are rare birds--fly high on your 39th! Many hugs- Joan
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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How lovely, Tom, and we can see that twinkle in her eyes, too. You have been blessed with a lovely bride and a lovely married life together. 40 years, your ruby anniversary next year. That is special. I wish you and your wife, many, many more happy years together. :) xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
    Thank you for a nice review and wonderful wishes.
Comment from robina1978
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You don't see a quatern very often. Your wife looks nice and cheerful. What a long time the two of you lasted. Happy anniversary and many to come.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2014
    Thank you Ine. Such a nice review and well wishes.
Comment from rod007
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A great poem and a wonderful tribute to your wife. Also a superb achievement, a marriage of near forty years and a cause for celebration. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
    Thank you rod. I only wish you could have had the same satisfaction.
Comment from DSMalott
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Very sweet.
Lovely form and the nicely structured rhymes were well placed and unforced to express such heart felt love.
Thanks for writing.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
    Thank you DSMalott.
Comment from tfawcus
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What a stunning use of the quatern to underline the abiding importance of that twinkle in the eye. I imagine that your poem would have caused those eyes to truly sparkle with delight.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
    Thank you tfawcus. Yes, she liked it.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
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Very nice tribute to a very lovely lady Mr.T Have you been taking lesson from me or maybe I have learned from you those words of love. Great work sir and may she always have that twinkle in eye.
TK

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
    Thank you Sir T. You always provide a good example when it comes to a good romantic verse.
Comment from Dawny53
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I just think it's really nice of you to have wrote this lovely poem as a tribute to your wife.. she must feel quite proud indeed! I also appreciate your authors notes, which are quite interesting all by themselves!

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
    Thank you Dawny. Im glad you liked both.
Comment from patcelaw
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What a wonderful tribute to a fine looking lady. Her face show such compassion and you are a lucky man to know her sweetness. 39 years of marriage is quite a feat in these times. Congrats. Pat

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 15-Nov-2014
    Thank you pat fot the review and sentiments.