Not Addict, Afficionado
5-7-5 Contest Winner!!!!!18 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
An unusual topic and presentation. I have my own spin on this, not sure if it is yours. I presume it is. Nevertheless, we've got what we've got. Sad but true.
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An unusual topic and presentation. I have my own spin on this, not sure if it is yours. I presume it is. Nevertheless, we've got what we've got. Sad but true.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Very good---thinking out of the box is a winner every time. Well done 5.7.5 and artwork. Great presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
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Hi,
Very good---thinking out of the box is a winner every time. Well done 5.7.5 and artwork. Great presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
Comment from Cosmic2011
Great concept. I am learning so much from poets like you who are able to expand the way I see, think about, and write poetry. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck!
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Great concept. I am learning so much from poets like you who are able to expand the way I see, think about, and write poetry. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is a cute write, mystery writer, I love the picture that you chose, made me smile as I read it, creative entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
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this is a cute write, mystery writer, I love the picture that you chose, made me smile as I read it, creative entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
Comment from Eric1
This is a great entry for this particular 5-7-5 competition, brilliantly original and a great choice of words to go with that fantastic photo, good luck my friend.
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This is a great entry for this particular 5-7-5 competition, brilliantly original and a great choice of words to go with that fantastic photo, good luck my friend.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
Comment from Domino 2
With respect, this appears as an '8-5-7-5', whereas the contest requires '575'.
I also find the formatting with different type faces, capitals and punctuation rather off-putting compared to a 575's usual simplicity.
Mind you, I could be in the minority, and the words are definitely entertaining, as is the gorilla's expression as he thinks what to enter in the contest. ;-).
Best wishes, Ray.
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With respect, this appears as an '8-5-7-5', whereas the contest requires '575'.
I also find the formatting with different type faces, capitals and punctuation rather off-putting compared to a 575's usual simplicity.
Mind you, I could be in the minority, and the words are definitely entertaining, as is the gorilla's expression as he thinks what to enter in the contest. ;-).
Best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
What a clever 5-7-5! I think I see the fingerprints of the writer all over this. Good luck to you from one aficionado and/or addict to another. Jeanie Mercer (P.S. I thought you had the spelling wrong, but I see "afficionado" is a second choice.)
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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What a clever 5-7-5! I think I see the fingerprints of the writer all over this. Good luck to you from one aficionado and/or addict to another. Jeanie Mercer (P.S. I thought you had the spelling wrong, but I see "afficionado" is a second choice.)
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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The picture gave me away! I was afraid of that. :) Glad you liked it. I'm glad there was a second choice, I didn't even look it up!! Better poetry contests then drugs or gambling. At least this is imaginary money ... usually. Ha!!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
It is certainly a 5-7-5 in terms of syllables. Having tumbled down this well myself, you may be too deep for the average voting creep LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and hope you brought forth unto this continent a winner.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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It is certainly a 5-7-5 in terms of syllables. Having tumbled down this well myself, you may be too deep for the average voting creep LOL. I wish you all the best in the voting and hope you brought forth unto this continent a winner.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2014
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Hahaha!!!! At least I got a great laugh. This review is worth it. Thank you. You've made my whole presidency worthwhile!!
