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Firecrackers will do

To scout around~ a welcome peak.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Neonewman
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Wonderful artwork above to compliment this well crafted piece you have delivered, and yes a winsome read indeed. God bless!

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
    Thank you for the appropriate review. But I sometimes have wondered what it takes to six my writtings.
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
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It has some nice imagery, and some pell mell rhythm, but I'm focused on the photo, and think the poem more aptly might describe fireworks. Kenny

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    Thank you kelper71 for the review. I have found that the picture would fit the poem~ an enhancement... instead of the other way around. I also figured in a new picture. Johnny
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Dear Johnnykid - since I am in my own celebrational mood this one snaps well, visually I could see the fireworks. Nice imagery played out in this work.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
    Thank you Maureen Napier for reviewing "Firecrackers will do." There is a revised version. I wish you well and am impressed with your poetry rank. Johnny