Get it together
My statement on Faith42 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Thank you dear brother for the poem/song. The words are outstanding. My life was a wreck for about 5 years when I was 14-19 and God allow a crossroads in my life. I had to make a choice, I chose to do what was right in his sight and got saved when I was 20. Just this year in June my life story was made into a radio drama for the Unshackled series. You can hear it at
My program numbers are 3325 and 3326, My name is Patricia Lawrence The programs aired on the sight Oct 5, 2014 and Oct 12, 2014
www.oneplace.com/ministries/unshackled
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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Thank you dear brother for the poem/song. The words are outstanding. My life was a wreck for about 5 years when I was 14-19 and God allow a crossroads in my life. I had to make a choice, I chose to do what was right in his sight and got saved when I was 20. Just this year in June my life story was made into a radio drama for the Unshackled series. You can hear it at
My program numbers are 3325 and 3326, My name is Patricia Lawrence The programs aired on the sight Oct 5, 2014 and Oct 12, 2014
www.oneplace.com/ministries/unshackled
Comment Written 13-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done.I love Unshackled and will attempt to listen to your story. May God Bless you.
Comment from TAB_that's me
These are wonderful song lyrics and a wonderful poem of faith for the contest. I wish you all the best in the contest.
Teresa
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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These are wonderful song lyrics and a wonderful poem of faith for the contest. I wish you all the best in the contest.
Teresa
Comment Written 13-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating of a 6 and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from DSMalott
No truer words.
I loved the bold and strong message you presented. The rhyming and cadence of the lines gave this a faced paced tempo and rhythmic value.
Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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No truer words.
I loved the bold and strong message you presented. The rhyming and cadence of the lines gave this a faced paced tempo and rhythmic value.
Thanks so much!
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from skye
Your examples are real, stark, and true.
Your solution is the best.
We cannot get it together until faith brings us to Him, and we follow the commandments.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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Your examples are real, stark, and true.
Your solution is the best.
We cannot get it together until faith brings us to Him, and we follow the commandments.
Excellent.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. making for a very inspiring read. This has good imagery and is very much work the sixer.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. making for a very inspiring read. This has good imagery and is very much work the sixer.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating of that elusive 6 and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
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You're welcome, Dr. Charlie
Comment from Just2Write
A great spiritual song - I can only imagine the tune, but the words seem to be rousing and upbeat. Loved the tone of these lyrics.
Just one nit -
you find my words are true
suggest a switch from 1st person to passive voice:
you find these words are true
Loved the rhyme of 'do' and 'guru' LOL.
Rose.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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A great spiritual song - I can only imagine the tune, but the words seem to be rousing and upbeat. Loved the tone of these lyrics.
Just one nit -
you find my words are true
suggest a switch from 1st person to passive voice:
you find these words are true
Loved the rhyme of 'do' and 'guru' LOL.
Rose.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback, If I had heard your suggestion on conception, it would read "you find these words are true"!
?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from Jackarrie
I do like your this song/poem you have written. I am not offended by your belief in the christian religion. Just as I would hope you would not be offended by my disbelief. You have a talent for writing and I can see how this would be very helpful to teens trying to get off their addictions.
So I would encourage you to keep writing. Mary
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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I do like your this song/poem you have written. I am not offended by your belief in the christian religion. Just as I would hope you would not be offended by my disbelief. You have a talent for writing and I can see how this would be very helpful to teens trying to get off their addictions.
So I would encourage you to keep writing. Mary
Comment Written 09-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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Mary, I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. My firm conviction is that no religious faith should ever be imposed on anyone by anyone. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from DALLAS01
This reminds me of being along the lines of a rap beat. Think you have just about covered all of the detours we take. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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This reminds me of being along the lines of a rap beat. Think you have just about covered all of the detours we take. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from rjuselius
this is an absolutely fine take on faith and how jesus christ is the real deal, the one! i thoroughly enjoyed your piece of poetic art!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest! this should be a strong contender!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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this is an absolutely fine take on faith and how jesus christ is the real deal, the one! i thoroughly enjoyed your piece of poetic art!
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest! this should be a strong contender!
rebekka x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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I believe I responded to this very generous and much appreciated review, but I can't find a copy of my response so this may be a double. I want to thank you so much for your 6 rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks for your kind words and of feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
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indeed, may love and god bless you always! rebekka x
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, dr. nad, you did an excellent job writing this song about letting Jesus give us the things that make us truly happy. I enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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this is an excellent write, dr. nad, you did an excellent job writing this song about letting Jesus give us the things that make us truly happy. I enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
