Get it together
My statement on Faith42 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
Great message in your poem, you don't have to apologise for spreading the word-we live in a Christian society. How sad that Political Correctness has made things haywire! People need to be reminded, though, I agree. Well chosen words and rhyming to convey your message. Most enjoyable and a Merry Christmas to you. Faye
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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Great message in your poem, you don't have to apologise for spreading the word-we live in a Christian society. How sad that Political Correctness has made things haywire! People need to be reminded, though, I agree. Well chosen words and rhyming to convey your message. Most enjoyable and a Merry Christmas to you. Faye
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. I'm a Christian too. Excellent faithful poetry.
YOU CAN TAKE MARIJUANA, SNORT PCP.
DROP SPEED OR ACID,BUZZ LIKE A BEE
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Excellent poem. I'm a Christian too. Excellent faithful poetry.
YOU CAN TAKE MARIJUANA, SNORT PCP.
DROP SPEED OR ACID,BUZZ LIKE A BEE
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
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THANK YOU!
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Dr Nad. This was lovely to read/sing on this cold Sunday afternoon in England. I can easily imagine it being sung as I found it quite uplifting. It certainly shows your strong faith in Jesus. Good luck.
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Hi Dr Nad. This was lovely to read/sing on this cold Sunday afternoon in England. I can easily imagine it being sung as I found it quite uplifting. It certainly shows your strong faith in Jesus. Good luck.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating of 6 and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words are so true.
Their life, will never be at peace until the let Jesus into the heart and soul.
Thank you for sharing.
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You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Your words are so true.
Their life, will never be at peace until the let Jesus into the heart and soul.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous 6 star rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from Aussie
I liked 'Get it Together.' Minister or not, your poem/song says much. We all have choices and there is the highway and the low, we know which way our souls should go. Blessings and Happy Christmas.
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I liked 'Get it Together.' Minister or not, your poem/song says much. We all have choices and there is the highway and the low, we know which way our souls should go. Blessings and Happy Christmas.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from Zue65
For me this deserved six stars, I love the way you pointed out the message that we can never get it together till Jesus gets to us. The examples you have given are perfect examples to drive your message. Hare Krishna, Muhammad, Scientology, Satanism, fashion, drugs, profession, intelligence, labels, wealth, all these temporal things mean nothing and are empty, meaningless endeavors unless you put Jesus in your life and allow Him to take control. I enjoyed the nuggets of wisdom in your poem.
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For me this deserved six stars, I love the way you pointed out the message that we can never get it together till Jesus gets to us. The examples you have given are perfect examples to drive your message. Hare Krishna, Muhammad, Scientology, Satanism, fashion, drugs, profession, intelligence, labels, wealth, all these temporal things mean nothing and are empty, meaningless endeavors unless you put Jesus in your life and allow Him to take control. I enjoyed the nuggets of wisdom in your poem.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating of 6 stars and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. A good poem for the faith contest. it gets your point of view across and it does indeed read like a song.
good luck in the contest
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Hi. A good poem for the faith contest. it gets your point of view across and it does indeed read like a song.
good luck in the contest
Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
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Namaste.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Wow! Praise the Lord! Speaking the truth of chosing Jesus and not the stuff of the world. So many youth chose the drugs and booze and then are depressed, sad and lonely. We need to go the distant and grab the youth from the evil of the world. Great message. Congrats on your award! God bless your Advent season of lights! soli deo Gloria! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Wow! Praise the Lord! Speaking the truth of chosing Jesus and not the stuff of the world. So many youth chose the drugs and booze and then are depressed, sad and lonely. We need to go the distant and grab the youth from the evil of the world. Great message. Congrats on your award! God bless your Advent season of lights! soli deo Gloria! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This is fitting today. Funny how God doesn't give up on us like we sometimes give up on us. You did a great job with this and who knows you might pull someone to the other (good) side with this. I didn't see any spags needing changing.
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This is fitting today. Funny how God doesn't give up on us like we sometimes give up on us. You did a great job with this and who knows you might pull someone to the other (good) side with this. I didn't see any spags needing changing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
Comment from royowen
Well done, I likewise have been a songwriter and been involved with the music ministry over many years, and have enjoyed the path that God has brought me on, now I still bring music into retirement homes and villages, but mainly write poetry on site, well done with your, the words are sublimely gospel, it has a metronomic rhythm to it, it scans beautifully, I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Roy.
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Well done, I likewise have been a songwriter and been involved with the music ministry over many years, and have enjoyed the path that God has brought me on, now I still bring music into retirement homes and villages, but mainly write poetry on site, well done with your, the words are sublimely gospel, it has a metronomic rhythm to it, it scans beautifully, I enjoyed it very much! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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I want to thank you for your generous rating and for your encouraging support. Thanks so much for your kind words and constructive feedback. ?Get it together ? is a Song/Poem that I wrote back in 1981 and always wanted to somehow someway get it out for a few people to read. It has finally been done. May God Bless you.
