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Poems that tell stories of long ago

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Comment from royowen
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I have visited Skye in Scotland and obviously Aviemore, Scotland is not very big so it's difficult not to see everything, I loved your poem, which had a definite Celtic feel, I am welsh extraction so the poet flows through the veins of the Celt! Well done, beautifully written, great tribute to the beauty that' personifies Maureen, well done, blessings Roy.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you Roy. She truly is a Celtic spirit.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Hi Treischel,
Oh I can't wait to read this to mum, she's sleeping at the moment.
Mum lived in Aviemore for some time in her early teens. I have heard her Celtic stories of Sgathaich too. This is a beauty to read. It is even more powerful knowing that mum so close to death and I mean breaths away from it the nurses told us to then take those moments of final life to find strength to fight through those battles and wake up. For only that was the key to her chance at life.

That has given her the ability to now fight her battles while awake. She is rallying and the doctor is quite amazed and yet he has been in Mum's struggle against cancer for 15 years. She has a long road of of recovery some of it will be a bit brutal and painful yet I know her Celtic warrior strength will again find victory. Your words remind me so mum of her grace and undeniable courage to keep facing cancer and her MS.
This is truly an awesome in so many ways.
Thank you,
Zoots

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you Courtney. I am so overwhelmed by all this. She truly is a warrior. You can see from all the attention that she is well loved on this site.
Comment from Wendyanne
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This is a truly lovely tribute to Maureen. I don't know her but have read much about her current health problems. I'm sure she would love this poem and I hope she gets the chance to read this.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you Wendyanne. I hope so too.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That is a lovely poem for Maureen, Tom, I am sure she knows what is going on around her as she floats the heavens waiting to see what God has decided will be her future. A moving tribute to one of Fanstory's favourites. xsx sandra

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you Sandra. I believe she has now come out of her coma. I wrote this before i knew that. If fact, i thought she was about to die.
Comment from rod007
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She is a great poet and writer. It is so sad there have been so much tragedy with the writers on this site with the demise of Gungalo and others. I wish Maureen speedy recovery so we can all enjoy her immense talent. Your tribute to her is heart-felt and profound. She'll be happy with your valuable poetic offering. Well done, Tom.

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you rod. I'm amazed at her strength and talent.
Comment from Eric1
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Hi Treischel, this is a wonderful - I won't say tribute - offering for the lovely Maureen,It is really well written, but I understood that she was now out of her coma, Her daughters posted a poem of hers earlier and said she was no longer in a coma.

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Yes, i wrote this before i saw that post. She is amazing.
reply by Eric1 on 04-Nov-2014
    She certainly is my friend.
Comment from robina1978
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I also snatched her picture form her profile page. The you wrote this beautiful poem for her and the children. Your poem sounds great but bit difficult to follow.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2014


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much Ine. I know you have been following and praying for her too. I had to research it to write it, and it is a bit difficult, being steeped in Celtic lore. Thank you for a wonderful review and those encouraging stars.