Comment from James Dooney

Exceptional

This is quite an interesting work of art here. I love how its a bit of a mix between a story and a poem. Very good work and keep it up !

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2014

Thanks James. '
A six star review is expected for all of a gifted writer's work but unfortunately do to 'Factors' we get the lesser!"
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Comment from sibhus

Excellent

I'll give you the five for creativity, but you really need to go back and sort through this for mispellings. They aren't even difficult just what appers as typing with out thinking, which I do a lot stuff like know for no. Difinitely and interesting and creative poem.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014

Thanks so much sibhus!
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