Love Story Of Wayne and Pat Lawrence
This is the final chapter of this story.12 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Pat,
Writing his memoir was such a touching thing for your husband to do. Shows his love in so many ways.
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When we arrived back in the Southern California area we rented a motel room for several weeks while we awaited the move into our home. When we finally got to move into our home we had our furniture delivered and got our wedding gifts which had been in safe keeping at the Pugh's home
Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Hi, Pat,
Writing his memoir was such a touching thing for your husband to do. Shows his love in so many ways.
~~~ You have two of the same paragraphs ~~~
When we arrived back in the Southern California area we rented a motel room for several weeks while we awaited the move into our home. When we finally got to move into our home we had our furniture delivered and got our wedding gifts which had been in safe keeping at the Pugh's home
Thx for sharing.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the review. Also thanks for pointing out the repeated paragraph. It has been corrected.
Comment from GracieAnn
pat, I did enjoy reading the story from your husband's point of view. It reminds us of a simpler time when values, ethics and morality was held by most in the country. Well composed. Hope your eyes have stabilized. Do you get injections in the eye? :0 GracieAnn
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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pat, I did enjoy reading the story from your husband's point of view. It reminds us of a simpler time when values, ethics and morality was held by most in the country. Well composed. Hope your eyes have stabilized. Do you get injections in the eye? :0 GracieAnn
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the review. I have been getting shot in one or the other eye for 5 years , every 6-8 weeks. This time it was only having to have eyes dilated.. The shots have saved my sight. I still face surgery for cataract on right eye.
