Random Reflections.
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Creator's mistake or a human folly."Poems of Random wandering; an inward look.
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Comment from adewpearl
has anyone ever saw - has seen
compelling use of questions to draw the reader into this thought-provoking issue
strong social commentary
Brooke
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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has anyone ever saw - has seen
compelling use of questions to draw the reader into this thought-provoking issue
strong social commentary
Brooke
Comment Written 01-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2014
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Thank you Brooke:
I appreciate your comments. I asked that question to myself? I hope you will read my other works. Thanks again.
Comment from A_Rabe
Well, the ideas presented make a person think for sure. The meter is a little distracting, as there is no real pattern, but the rhymes are appreciated.
My answer to the poet is that the Creator didn't create the mess. Adam & Eve in their disobedience to the Creator made the mess. But, the Creator did send His one and only Son, Jesus Christ to reconcile created & Creator. When we look to Evolution as the answer to being "created", this idea only cements the racism you talk about. Rejecting the Creator won't help your cause. Diversity was built into Adam & Eve, Noah & his wife. Diversity is a beautiful thing. We as humans are the ones who have messed it up. May I suggest an online trip to OneBlood.com? Very good site!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Well, the ideas presented make a person think for sure. The meter is a little distracting, as there is no real pattern, but the rhymes are appreciated.
My answer to the poet is that the Creator didn't create the mess. Adam & Eve in their disobedience to the Creator made the mess. But, the Creator did send His one and only Son, Jesus Christ to reconcile created & Creator. When we look to Evolution as the answer to being "created", this idea only cements the racism you talk about. Rejecting the Creator won't help your cause. Diversity was built into Adam & Eve, Noah & his wife. Diversity is a beautiful thing. We as humans are the ones who have messed it up. May I suggest an online trip to OneBlood.com? Very good site!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
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Thanks for your comment but I look at life not through eyeglasses of any religion. I have no cause to chase nor any power to please. Poem only reflects on what we got on our hand that is why it is titled as a question for each reader to decide for themselves.
