Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

I'll continue reading....there are a few things which I need refreshing about your story. Onto the next chapter. Thank you for writing about your life. It's not easy to write one's self.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Thanks for your review.

Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Your husband was very dedicated...Think it is better to marry sometimes, an older person than youself...As men seem to mature at a later rate than women...Though Wade looks really young in his wedding picture...His memory about so many details were remarkable.....My husband, because he had, a bad case of carbon monoxide poisoning 2003 & 2005 , doesn't remember our wedding, or a lot of other things....Though, with God's help, he survived, though still has loss of a lot of good memories.

Caressa

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thanks for reading and reviewing ou story.

Wayne had a very good memory for details and even told stories of his childhood at the time he wrote our love story. He was a proud papa and he loved his daughters very much.
I am sorry that happened to your husband. Tomorrow I will be putting up a story about our first 5 years of marriage. These 5 years don't yet have our daughters starting to school.
I will probably tell the story in 5 year time spans.

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

A nice photo that complements your chapter very well. Nice to know you kissed and dated first, then he asked you if you wanted to marry him. Yes, of course.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thank you for the nice review.
Yes, we dated, then we kissed and he asked me if I would Marry him. I knew he loved me and I knew I loved him so of course was the only answer I could honestly come up with.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

another lovely chapter.
You captured my attention from the very first line.
I like how you are telling g the story of your life.
can't wait until I read the next one.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014

Thanks for the review

reply by misscookie on 29-Oct-2014

Your very welcome, have a blessed day.
Cookie

Comment from boxergirl

Excellent

Interesting continuation of your story. Good that you shared your past with him and he still wanted to get to know you better. 8-)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thank you for the review. When it came time to tell my husband about my past it was necessary. First off my body was not very perfect as it show the scars of having had a child, Also I had family members who were willing to destroy any relationship I might be involved in. Then too I wanted my relationship on honesty, which was in my mind the best policy.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Love the story but the reaction to spank you would have gotten you scared. Seemed he could become violent.Well I am glad to see you took the chance and had a wonderful life. That shows how we ll have different interpretations of certain actions

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thanks for the review and comments.

Since I had grown up in a home with a very abusive father, I had to know. If I had children I did not want them abused like my brothers and sisters and I were. I was not quite expecting a spanking, but I found out what I needed to know. Life with Wayne was a pleasure and you will hear more about our life together in upcoming chapters.

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

I love a good love story. But this being the first chapter I've read of this book, I'm confused. It's told as from the male's point of view (Wayne?)with, I'm guessing, you being the Pat who he's writing about.

I'll make that assumption until you tell me differently.

One spacing error and a misspell:

After dating for three weeks [You need to go into the edit mode and double space between every paragraph (I thought there were more problems with it, but you also did it the paragraph below).]

what she revealed to me that night an took her home immediately. [... AND took her home...]

I will certainly read more of your love story.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thanks for the review. Also thanks for the pointing out the problems, Since my eyesight is poor I sometimes don't catch what others might see, I don't have anyone but the others on the site to proofread my work.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

What a story, He appears to be a lovely man you were very lucky to have met him. He even passed your test of finding out if he would be violent. Did he enjoy writing?

I enjoyed reading it.

Mary

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thanks for the review. He was never much into writing until we hear a program that was talking about writing our memories for our children. He was impressed and took to the computer and began to write. he was quite proud the he would be able to leave his daughter with some of he memories. He indeed was every bit as nice a man as comes across in the story.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Pat,

Wow, what story! That took a lot to test him. And just as difficult for him to worry and wonder what was wrong with you, and then his reaction. WoW!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

Thank you for the review.
I do hope you see why I tested him as I did.

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 28-Oct-2014

Of course. It had to have taken courage for you to do it, for sure.

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2014

I don't think it took too much courage, I knew he was a good man, I just wanted to see him angry. I didn't expect a spanking though and my uncle told him, he should have left me up the mountain. :-)

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 28-Oct-2014

Uh=oh!! That could have opened up a whole new can of worms! (*.*)