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Inspiration of Life from Photographs

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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The poem is perfect for the picture which I believe came first. What an interesting way to find inspiration in unusual things. I enjoyed reading the poem and thinking about the original. Good job. I see no changes. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
    Thank you jannypan. I think it is good to use the imagination.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Excellent! Children will love this one, they like anything quirky these days, LOL. A book of them would be great fun. I like the photo of the tree, it really does look like a sheep. I am going to PM you. I have learnt something that might help you. xsx sandra

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2014
    Thank you Sandra, I'll look for it.
Comment from MagKing
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You seem more to me like an adventurer and traveler, taking many adventurous traveling to see, learn and complete your suspicion, and then put them in black and white.
Your notes and the content it self proves this.
Fine poet you are!
...Smiling...

MagKing

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you MagKing. Yes, i like to go places. That inspires me.
Comment from Capricorn30
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28 poem of animated stills--good for you!
"The Lost Sheep"--another well-penned addition to your book;
Discovering Little Bo Peep's lost sheep within the forest; one never knows what discoveries will be made in dark woods--with a bit of imagination we may discover plenty.
A fun re-creation of a beloved nursery rhyme.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you Margaret. It was a fun write.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is so cool. The imagination to do this piece is brilliant. Good writing . it was an enjoyable read. The photo indeed does look like an animal is stuck int o the trunk bark

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you parcelaw, i appreciate your review very much
Comment from rod007
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A nice intriguing little poem. They better not use a chainsaw to free the lamb otherwise it will be lamb stew for supper! Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
    Thank you rod. Hah, i guess your right about that.