Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "A Friendly Gathering"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
17 total reviews
Comment from Darkhorse555
really most enjoyable piece of writing mikey smiling and the footnotes really helped excellent piece of writing dear pal beautifully penned as always
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really most enjoyable piece of writing mikey smiling and the footnotes really helped excellent piece of writing dear pal beautifully penned as always
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Another good chapter, that delightful priest can not leave well alone, so he can get his evil hands on the unsuspecting ones. Good characterisations and interesting plot. Faye
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Another good chapter, that delightful priest can not leave well alone, so he can get his evil hands on the unsuspecting ones. Good characterisations and interesting plot. Faye
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
Comment from ravenblack
you handled the conversational interrogation of Florentina well. the story of the wolves at her command and Leopold's thoughts like a prosecutor gathering evidence - he is the real wolf here.
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you handled the conversational interrogation of Florentina well. the story of the wolves at her command and Leopold's thoughts like a prosecutor gathering evidence - he is the real wolf here.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
You are getting better avd better with the dialogue and feel for this time frame. This is as smooth as glass. I would swear this was written by one who was there. Exceptional indeed.
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You are getting better avd better with the dialogue and feel for this time frame. This is as smooth as glass. I would swear this was written by one who was there. Exceptional indeed.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
I see that Father Leopold is a threat. he sees what he only wants to see. He sure is cross examining the poor lass' Yes, they should not speak of wolves anymore. Not to raise suspicion upon them. Yep, a birdie was up in a tree. Perfect timing for the brother to intervene. Think they made lots of stew back then. Leopold makes a rifle scope. Expensive, must be an Italian brand. Looks good word wise. Count your doubloon, Lion King. I see six vicious wolves stalking a herd of sheep. do loco
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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I see that Father Leopold is a threat. he sees what he only wants to see. He sure is cross examining the poor lass' Yes, they should not speak of wolves anymore. Not to raise suspicion upon them. Yep, a birdie was up in a tree. Perfect timing for the brother to intervene. Think they made lots of stew back then. Leopold makes a rifle scope. Expensive, must be an Italian brand. Looks good word wise. Count your doubloon, Lion King. I see six vicious wolves stalking a herd of sheep. do loco
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Hey bro! Wondered where you were. Yep, he's a big pain and it is all going to his head. Just posted the next episode. It's getting tense!! Appreciate the great review. I must say that this is the thing that I have most liked writing. I must have lived in these times in a previous life!! Post something. I'm still eighty thousand words short on my book for the contest. Hahaha. mikey
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Will Be doing more viewing later today. Need them doubloon to promote a chapter. Leopold is gonna be a royal thorn in the brisket, it seems... have fun, that's what it's all about. good day, Lion King. Eat you a bulldog. Lol!
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, the snake seems to be winding his way to find a way to strike. I find myself torn. On the one hand possession is not of God, yet the reader is brought to a place of seeing those affected as sympathetic characters. Somewhat of a precarious position. Solid writing with believable dialogue. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, the snake seems to be winding his way to find a way to strike. I find myself torn. On the one hand possession is not of God, yet the reader is brought to a place of seeing those affected as sympathetic characters. Somewhat of a precarious position. Solid writing with believable dialogue. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
Comment from robina1978
They fear for Julia's and Florentina's life. Especially the little girl gets instructions not to talk at all about the visions of the wolves, just when they are amongst each other.
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They fear for Julia's and Florentina's life. Especially the little girl gets instructions not to talk at all about the visions of the wolves, just when they are amongst each other.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I hope the group will realize that Florentina told Leopold everything. No way he should have allowed her to go off with that creep, unless he went too. But now the truth is out, so... what can they do to protect the girls now???
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I hope the group will realize that Florentina told Leopold everything. No way he should have allowed her to go off with that creep, unless he went too. But now the truth is out, so... what can they do to protect the girls now???
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
Comment from seaglass
I fear Floretina has given that nasty priest the evidence he is searching for. Now to see how they plan a defense. And they warned her not to speak of the wolves in his presents. Just like a kid for you.
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I fear Floretina has given that nasty priest the evidence he is searching for. Now to see how they plan a defense. And they warned her not to speak of the wolves in his presents. Just like a kid for you.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Leopold is definitely not to be trusted. Anything any of the others say, he will twist around to suit his own warped thinking. Another well crafted chapter.
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Leopold is definitely not to be trusted. Anything any of the others say, he will twist around to suit his own warped thinking. Another well crafted chapter.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2014
