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Man goes crazy in line at Wal-Mart19 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
ll, that is precisely why I hate Walmart. I will avoid it like the plague. I go at 10:00 am or 3:00 pm if my husband begs me to go. LOL. Great a a and so forth couplet rhyming. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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ll, that is precisely why I hate Walmart. I will avoid it like the plague. I go at 10:00 am or 3:00 pm if my husband begs me to go. LOL. Great a a and so forth couplet rhyming. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 29-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2014
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Thank you again for taking the time to review and comment.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Ha! This very well written, rhyming poem is great. It is true to life and it is humorous also. It flows so smoothly. Your words are easy to read and understand. It is interesting and held my attention till the end. The end stanza is pure humor - I loved it. Nice job, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Ha! This very well written, rhyming poem is great. It is true to life and it is humorous also. It flows so smoothly. Your words are easy to read and understand. It is interesting and held my attention till the end. The end stanza is pure humor - I loved it. Nice job, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 27-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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Thank you for reading and taking the time to write such a nice review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, lynglyng, you did an excellent job writing this. this disturbed me the other day when a woman behind me that was in line with me when the sign got cut off was told he would not wait on her because it was time for him to get cut off. she went to the manager but he still left. someone from customer service had to wait on her.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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this is an excellent write, lynglyng, you did an excellent job writing this. this disturbed me the other day when a woman behind me that was in line with me when the sign got cut off was told he would not wait on her because it was time for him to get cut off. she went to the manager but he still left. someone from customer service had to wait on her.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2014
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That is sad that customers spend their hard earned money and are treated like that. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Neonewman
This is a daily constant at the Wal-Mart in our little town. Oh, it's a super Wal-Mart at that and on the slowest of hours it is packed. Never figure this one out!
God Bless!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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This is a daily constant at the Wal-Mart in our little town. Oh, it's a super Wal-Mart at that and on the slowest of hours it is packed. Never figure this one out!
God Bless!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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thank you for your review.
Comment from risktaker
I can relate. I have felt rejection and resentment when experiencing this event also. I find it difficult to have to wait for long periods when the store makes so much money. I think cashing out should be the fastest service and the easiest service to get. So cold and indifferent, " clean up on aisle 5.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I can relate. I have felt rejection and resentment when experiencing this event also. I find it difficult to have to wait for long periods when the store makes so much money. I think cashing out should be the fastest service and the easiest service to get. So cold and indifferent, " clean up on aisle 5.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for your review and the time you took to write it.
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Comment from jmdg1954
Hmph. Normally the sign goes to the last person in line. I've never seen that happen before. I'm sure it does...
Nicely told on rhythmic fashion. John
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Hmph. Normally the sign goes to the last person in line. I've never seen that happen before. I'm sure it does...
Nicely told on rhythmic fashion. John
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from gypsymoth
Now I don't care who you are, that's funny. I worked there once long enough to know that they should be considered another country.Obama could be their president. You would have to be crude, unmannerly, and dress in clothes like you bought them in a sausage factory to enter. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsymoth
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Now I don't care who you are, that's funny. I worked there once long enough to know that they should be considered another country.Obama could be their president. You would have to be crude, unmannerly, and dress in clothes like you bought them in a sausage factory to enter. Good luck with the contest.
Gypsymoth
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for taking the time to read and write a review.
Comment from brentman99
I lime the humour and sentiment that you raise. However, I had a hard time getting a steady rhythm in my head while trying to read it. Probably me. I've been that person as well. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I lime the humour and sentiment that you raise. However, I had a hard time getting a steady rhythm in my head while trying to read it. Probably me. I've been that person as well. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for your honest review.
Comment from granny goes viral
And you were quiet about it? I would have been furious. And loud. Loudly furious. Call the manager, call the newspapers. Call Channel two news. Take pictures. Post them on People of Wal-mart.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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And you were quiet about it? I would have been furious. And loud. Loudly furious. Call the manager, call the newspapers. Call Channel two news. Take pictures. Post them on People of Wal-mart.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the review and taking the time to write it.
Comment from rjpurdy
Your poem is funny but I struggled to find the rhythm of the poem. It felt forced to me, hence the 4. I think you could trim some words or configure them a little different. You also forgot the quotation on the last word of the poem. The content is good. I have been that person too. rj
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Your poem is funny but I struggled to find the rhythm of the poem. It felt forced to me, hence the 4. I think you could trim some words or configure them a little different. You also forgot the quotation on the last word of the poem. The content is good. I have been that person too. rj
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thank you for your helpful review and corrections.
