All You Can Eat
Anapestic Tetrameter Quatrains AABB36 total reviews
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, I checked the description of this type of write because it was new to me. You have fulfilled the elements of the contest with precision, humor and seasonal flavor, no pun intended. LOL. Well done, my friend. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, I checked the description of this type of write because it was new to me. You have fulfilled the elements of the contest with precision, humor and seasonal flavor, no pun intended. LOL. Well done, my friend. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from trimple
Hi Mkey
Firstly, congratulations with your excellent sonnet win. Well done.
Well this set of four will certainly give your contenders a run for their money.
A funny Halloween poem using some interesting words. Quite original me dear.
Enjoyed the lingo of this orrid witch, as it gave a good sense of her wretchedness.
Kind regards
trimple
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Hi Mkey
Firstly, congratulations with your excellent sonnet win. Well done.
Well this set of four will certainly give your contenders a run for their money.
A funny Halloween poem using some interesting words. Quite original me dear.
Enjoyed the lingo of this orrid witch, as it gave a good sense of her wretchedness.
Kind regards
trimple
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Funny. I enjoyed your poem. I do not know of this mechanics part, so I will not comment on that aspect. I will say, though, that your poem had great flow. I liked the way the verses flow. I know that is related to the meter "thing." I like the rhyme. It is not forced and adds to the story. No changes needed as far as I can tell. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Funny. I enjoyed your poem. I do not know of this mechanics part, so I will not comment on that aspect. I will say, though, that your poem had great flow. I liked the way the verses flow. I know that is related to the meter "thing." I like the rhyme. It is not forced and adds to the story. No changes needed as far as I can tell. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from Sasha
This is hysterical and brilliantly written. Terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I don't know why, but despite loving poetry, I cannot get two words to rhyme for the life of me and the complicated rules of the all too many forms just make me dizzy. Great work with this one my talented friend.
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This is hysterical and brilliantly written. Terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. I don't know why, but despite loving poetry, I cannot get two words to rhyme for the life of me and the complicated rules of the all too many forms just make me dizzy. Great work with this one my talented friend.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from Joe_P
I find your rhymes amusing -- "wimp" and "simp". Of course, "simp" is a contraction of "simpleton". (I looked it up). The rhythm and the rhyme remind me very much of Dr. Seuss stories I used to read to my son when he was little. Very well done.
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I find your rhymes amusing -- "wimp" and "simp". Of course, "simp" is a contraction of "simpleton". (I looked it up). The rhythm and the rhyme remind me very much of Dr. Seuss stories I used to read to my son when he was little. Very well done.
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
Haha! Great ending on this poem, Mikey. A very enjoyable and run read for Halloween. Good luck in the contest.
As an all you can eat fest, now, this is the least!" -- Missing open quotations.
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Haha! Great ending on this poem, Mikey. A very enjoyable and run read for Halloween. Good luck in the contest.
As an all you can eat fest, now, this is the least!" -- Missing open quotations.
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
