From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Dream Prayer"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from lakeport
Dream prayer. indeed I love to dream,That's a wonderful expressed story poem. very nice rhyming and flow. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Lakeport.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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Dream prayer. indeed I love to dream,That's a wonderful expressed story poem. very nice rhyming and flow. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you.Lakeport.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2014
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Dear Lakeport: thanks very much for this kind review and blessings to you as well...Vance
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you are welcome.lakport.
Comment from val fitchie
not sure if the underlying emotion is fear, disdain, or hope. Is there a respect for darkness here, or a musing/observation? Whichever it is, It IS UNDOUBTEDLY somehow understood by us readers by the sheer AUTHORITIVE verbal account of SOMETHING happening here- told in such romanticized personable tones that are vague yet gospel truth?!?! how can it be BOTH?!?! You are a mist of clarity
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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not sure if the underlying emotion is fear, disdain, or hope. Is there a respect for darkness here, or a musing/observation? Whichever it is, It IS UNDOUBTEDLY somehow understood by us readers by the sheer AUTHORITIVE verbal account of SOMETHING happening here- told in such romanticized personable tones that are vague yet gospel truth?!?! how can it be BOTH?!?! You are a mist of clarity
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Hi Val: really great to hear from you and your comments are very thoughtful, thought-provoking (which I love always) and most of all, greatly appreciated! So nice to know you are out there in the ether...interesting "mist of clarity" ....watch for more on that .... you do stimulate the mind dear friend! Vance
Comment from Darkhorse555
love how this piece ended empowering the mind just held me for a while in them words dear friend truly a very beautifully painted picture
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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love how this piece ended empowering the mind just held me for a while in them words dear friend truly a very beautifully painted picture
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Thank you so very much and very sincerely for your kind review. You always lift the spirit! Many thanks, Vace
Comment from robina1978
Cute and lovely photo that complements your poem very well. I liked the combination you used. A prayer in your dreams? Nice and original subject.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Cute and lovely photo that complements your poem very well. I liked the combination you used. A prayer in your dreams? Nice and original subject.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Ah hah..there ou are again dear one, just one single line down and another lovey review. Thanks so much.
Comment from tbacha58
Let me use this time to create what is good and find no reason to ever fear it
Let my works in dreams call for good and bless me in the mission only God could
Let me rest and empower my mind and soul to do what is right for my heart and soul.
AMEN
Excellent xoxo
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Let me use this time to create what is good and find no reason to ever fear it
Let my works in dreams call for good and bless me in the mission only God could
Let me rest and empower my mind and soul to do what is right for my heart and soul.
AMEN
Excellent xoxo
Comment Written 22-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Ah: Terry my dear, I really loved writing this piece and I'm so glad and grateful for those lovely six stars! X0X0X0X Vance
Comment from royowen
Great words you have used here Vance, in spite of us living in a place where darkness seems to rule, remember the words of scripture that promises that God is even in the darkness, that "He will never leave us or forsake us" so we can be sure that He uses your hand to testify of the light, remember, we are to be a "beacon on a hill" well done, be not fearful He guides your hand Vance, bless His name! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Great words you have used here Vance, in spite of us living in a place where darkness seems to rule, remember the words of scripture that promises that God is even in the darkness, that "He will never leave us or forsake us" so we can be sure that He uses your hand to testify of the light, remember, we are to be a "beacon on a hill" well done, be not fearful He guides your hand Vance, bless His name! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Dear Roy: thank you so much for this wonderful rating and great review! I am very touched by your words and even more blessed by your friendship and kindness. Blessings to you as well dear friend! Vance
Comment from TashaDarling
I truly enjoyed your work. It was unique and inspiring. The words just seemed to flow and create a very beautiful piece of work.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I truly enjoyed your work. It was unique and inspiring. The words just seemed to flow and create a very beautiful piece of work.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Dear TashaDarling..or would is say "DAHLING" though we are new friends so perhaps that's a bit presumptuous. Thank you for your kind review and I hope to see you often. I shall come and visit your work as well.. Many thanks, Vance
Comment from Neonewman
Just a beautifully inspiring, well-crafted piece. I enjoyed it through and through and read it again. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Just a beautifully inspiring, well-crafted piece. I enjoyed it through and through and read it again. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Dear Neonewman: thank you for your kind review and I'm so pleased that it gave you some enjoyment and inspiration...I guess that is why we are here but it's certainly my mission! I sure hope to see you again and will come round and visit you. God Bless you! Vance
Comment from Irish Rain
And Amen! Very colorful and original pondering on the jet of night, where all the mysteries await! I too, get all my ideas in the darkness of night, my greatest inspirations come in the wooing of its magic...loved this!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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And Amen! Very colorful and original pondering on the jet of night, where all the mysteries await! I too, get all my ideas in the darkness of night, my greatest inspirations come in the wooing of its magic...loved this!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Dear Irish Rain: wow my friend, you are up late...pondering what you may be dreaming about tonight eh??? Such a great review and so many thanks to you..new friend! I truly appreciate you kind comments and certainly hope to see you again soon. I shall visit you as well. Kindest regards, thanks, and blessings! Vance
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Thank you so much! You already know me...Justjo...I changed my name because I always thought that Justjo sounded like a baked potato with no toppings...('yeah, I'll have a justjo, dieting you know', ha ha) as usual...your writing is WONDERFUL! I'm ALWAYS up late...I'm most definitely a night person, which is another reason I related so strongly to your poem! Blessings tonight!
