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She Did, Right -Now She Does Write

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Life story of Patricia Lawrence

28 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
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A most interesting beginning here on your book journey - wishing you every success as you work on it and looking forward to reading it -what an exciting adventure !

 Comment Written 03-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2020
    Thank you Zanya for your excellent review and kind words.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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Patricia, I have often enjoyed reading about your journey through life and how it has strengthened your faith and shaped your future. I especially enjoyed the part of this passage about the rose. It's a simple poem, but so gull of earned wisdom, and truly a blessing to read. Thank you!

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your lovely review.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 05-Oct-2019
    You're welcome, Patricia.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 05-Oct-2019
    You're welcome, Patricia.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 05-Oct-2019
    You're welcome, Patricia.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 05-Oct-2019
    You're welcome, Patricia.
reply by brenda faye curtis on 05-Oct-2019
    You're welcome, Patricia.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I admire your great faith Patricia and your belief has helped you live your life well and bring up your wonderful daughters after a tragic childhood, you deserve the best, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from Spangle
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God knows what we need long before we do. It is wonderful how faithful He is to His promises. I am so glad you found 'writing' and are using your talent and creativeness at FanStory to help others. Your posting is very inspiring and I'm so happy you are sharing it. xoxo

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written prologue to your book. We all have troubles in our lives. Some will only feel sorry for themselves and complain all the time. I admire those who rise above their troubles and become a blessing for other.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from Mistydawn
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This is a beautifully written spiritual piece. A small memoir of your life and how the Lord has helped you through it all. How he's given you trials to help you learn and grow. Be who you're meant to be. Your poem is very well-written. It emphasizes what you said above. Your pastor's kind words are a great testament to what a wonderful person you truly are.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from Joan E.
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How wonderful that your pastor wrote such a laudatory letter as the forward to your autobiography. I admired your "wrapped box" and "thorns" metaphors plus the rhymes and "puzzle" simile in your poems. Enjoy your latest adventure- Joan

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from lyenochka
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Wonderful thoughts and poems to begin the prologue to your autobiographical book, Patricia. And it's wonderful that your pastor also wrote the foreword.
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"FORWARD:" (Foreword) Forward is a direction.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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God has blessed you, Patricia. And, you have blessed us in return by sharing your poetry. Your faith is truly inspirational. You have done well by posting your spiritual beliefs.
You should take great comfort in this. Best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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I liked to see the author who has dared put the prologue of her book up first, I have not seen this before (although I admit my experience is limited). It is particularly relevant to me, as I don't start to write until I have the whole book mapped out in my mind, so I also usually start with the prologue or preface, to keep me advancing in the right direction.
I particularly liked:
I knew I was a bright person and learned quickly, yet so many times I have felt like a miserable failure. Now God is giving me insight into the meaning of my life.
I am looking forwards to reading the book as it comes along.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your review.