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Comment from rod007
Excellent portrayal of a child's imagination and want at the fair. I remember those days as a child, everything was so magical. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Excellent portrayal of a child's imagination and want at the fair. I remember those days as a child, everything was so magical. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Thanks Rid. Oh to be young again!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Fairs certainly do hold much to tempt the senses, especially for the young.
A well presented and written Triple Whitney poem of three stanzas.
It certainly seemed as though you both had lots of enjoyment in each other's company.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Fairs certainly do hold much to tempt the senses, especially for the young.
A well presented and written Triple Whitney poem of three stanzas.
It certainly seemed as though you both had lots of enjoyment in each other's company.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Thanks Shirley. Yup, that was the best part.
Comment from Joan E.
I really enjoy the Whitney form and you have created an effective series, accented as usual by your wonderful photographs--the collage is very appealing. I admired your rhymes, and the reference to the butterflies brought back neat memories of two pavilions we visited recently. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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I really enjoy the Whitney form and you have created an effective series, accented as usual by your wonderful photographs--the collage is very appealing. I admired your rhymes, and the reference to the butterflies brought back neat memories of two pavilions we visited recently. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Thank you Joan for your lovely astute comments
Comment from Writing~Soith
This almost brought a tear to my eye. My little one is all grown up and we use to do these things when we would visit my mother. Such lovely words and you have amazing stanzas. The imagery was superb and fit perfect. Very well done. Best one I've seen on here yet!!!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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This almost brought a tear to my eye. My little one is all grown up and we use to do these things when we would visit my mother. Such lovely words and you have amazing stanzas. The imagery was superb and fit perfect. Very well done. Best one I've seen on here yet!!!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Well thank you very much for this outstanding review. I really appreciate the kudos.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello Tom,
LONG time no see. I've wondered where you've been.
Congratulations on the completion of your book. How does it feel to be a published author? Wow!
Looks like young Jeremy had an amazing day with Gramps. :)
Have a great weekend. So glad to bump into you today.
Sonali
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Hello Tom,
LONG time no see. I've wondered where you've been.
Congratulations on the completion of your book. How does it feel to be a published author? Wow!
Looks like young Jeremy had an amazing day with Gramps. :)
Have a great weekend. So glad to bump into you today.
Sonali
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Thank you Sonali. Its great to be back writing.
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Good to have you back, Tom.
Comment from AnnieGale
Love this and all the photo's. I'm a new grandmother and I hope I'm able to do all these things with them. those will be special days while bringing back memories of when mine where that age...thank you for sharing, just sweetly beautiful
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Love this and all the photo's. I'm a new grandmother and I hope I'm able to do all these things with them. those will be special days while bringing back memories of when mine where that age...thank you for sharing, just sweetly beautiful
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Thank you Annie, its great to be a grand parent.
