Stardust Fell
A poem for Maureen54 total reviews
Comment from Ninap2
"I know whether she stays earthbound
or if her spirit soars free like an eagle,
her legacy will endure. For as long
as we breathe her name, she
will remain forever, timeless."
What a great way to end your awe-inspiring poem!
You did such a nice job with formatting and verbiage.
God Bless -Christina
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"I know whether she stays earthbound
or if her spirit soars free like an eagle,
her legacy will endure. For as long
as we breathe her name, she
will remain forever, timeless."
What a great way to end your awe-inspiring poem!
You did such a nice job with formatting and verbiage.
God Bless -Christina
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
This is such a beautiful tribute to Maureen.
I know that if she could see or hear this a tear would trickle down her cheek too.
The image is absolutely stunning and so perfect for this poem and Maureen does so love the stars at night.
So many lovely thoughts are expressed and I'm sure will bring great comfort and peace to her family.
A virtual six.
:-) Shirley
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This is such a beautiful tribute to Maureen.
I know that if she could see or hear this a tear would trickle down her cheek too.
The image is absolutely stunning and so perfect for this poem and Maureen does so love the stars at night.
So many lovely thoughts are expressed and I'm sure will bring great comfort and peace to her family.
A virtual six.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from adewpearl
excellent use of enjambment to create flow of thought from line to line
lovely visuals
she is like the stardust - a most effective simile
wonderful imagery in delivering a very thoughtful tribute to our friend, Maureen :-) Brooke
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excellent use of enjambment to create flow of thought from line to line
lovely visuals
she is like the stardust - a most effective simile
wonderful imagery in delivering a very thoughtful tribute to our friend, Maureen :-) Brooke
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from flamingstar
What a gorgeous illustration to match your beautiful poem. A lovely and delicate tribute to your friend who (I assume) still hovers between Heaven and earth.
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What a gorgeous illustration to match your beautiful poem. A lovely and delicate tribute to your friend who (I assume) still hovers between Heaven and earth.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from Eric1
Hi Idamarty, This is a wonderfully written tribute to Maureen whom we have in our prayers every day, your words are inspiring my friend, full of beautiful description and imagery, thank you for writing. God bless and have a lovely weekend.
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Hi Idamarty, This is a wonderfully written tribute to Maureen whom we have in our prayers every day, your words are inspiring my friend, full of beautiful description and imagery, thank you for writing. God bless and have a lovely weekend.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from rjuselius
this is an exquisite tribute to maureen. i really do not know her personally but through her reviews and poems reflected her talent as a poet with a poet's soul. she is dearly missed.
thank you for sharing! virtual six..
rebekka x
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this is an exquisite tribute to maureen. i really do not know her personally but through her reviews and poems reflected her talent as a poet with a poet's soul. she is dearly missed.
thank you for sharing! virtual six..
rebekka x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from Caressa_08
A virtual six to this beautiful tribute to a wonderful poet, who most of us who have been here for a time recognize, and too a Dear friend of yours...I like your entire poem, though the last stanza is so true for me, as I think all of us here what the best for Maureen, though think her poetry has spoken to us & has definitely left its enlightening mark on us, even though most of us have never met her in person, & just know her through her poetry & the reviews that she gave to our writings.
Caressa
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A virtual six to this beautiful tribute to a wonderful poet, who most of us who have been here for a time recognize, and too a Dear friend of yours...I like your entire poem, though the last stanza is so true for me, as I think all of us here what the best for Maureen, though think her poetry has spoken to us & has definitely left its enlightening mark on us, even though most of us have never met her in person, & just know her through her poetry & the reviews that she gave to our writings.
Caressa
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from Christine B.
Maureen has a lot to return to here. I hope she awakens, sees the overwhelming support. Remembering someone keeps the traces of them fresh. She has been remembered. Hopefully she will read this herself and share most heartfelt feelings.
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Maureen has a lot to return to here. I hope she awakens, sees the overwhelming support. Remembering someone keeps the traces of them fresh. She has been remembered. Hopefully she will read this herself and share most heartfelt feelings.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from Diny
Fitting tribute to the poet friend of many...
I think she would be pleased by these words and sentiments
Write on
Such Touching verse
DINY
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Fitting tribute to the poet friend of many...
I think she would be pleased by these words and sentiments
Write on
Such Touching verse
DINY
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
Comment from James Dooney
This is top drawer and I am sure that maureen will love it when she reads it. It flows really well and ... well... read the score.
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This is top drawer and I am sure that maureen will love it when she reads it. It flows really well and ... well... read the score.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
