Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Valerius Begins His Practice"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
19 total reviews
Comment from Darkhorse555
now this story i love watching were it is going mikey such a delightful piece of writing dear friend really very beautifully penned excellent read
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now this story i love watching were it is going mikey such a delightful piece of writing dear friend really very beautifully penned excellent read
Comment Written 14-Oct-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Valerius did a good job patching up the soldiers. It is strange for Julia to have these memories of a previous life, but it seems she doesn't understand it is from a previous life. Had she not made that connection yet? Another great chapter.
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Valerius did a good job patching up the soldiers. It is strange for Julia to have these memories of a previous life, but it seems she doesn't understand it is from a previous life. Had she not made that connection yet? Another great chapter.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2014
Comment from faragon
Valerius took a great risk in helping the soldiers. I like how he gave a thought to what Julia said about him being a commander. I also like how Trellitia is really listening to her and not just humoring her.
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Valerius took a great risk in helping the soldiers. I like how he gave a thought to what Julia said about him being a commander. I also like how Trellitia is really listening to her and not just humoring her.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from Sasha
You are conveying the confusion Julia's 'visions' cause very well. This was a time of little education and obviously no understanding of how the mind works. Great work with this one. Like all the others, I enjoyed it very much.
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You are conveying the confusion Julia's 'visions' cause very well. This was a time of little education and obviously no understanding of how the mind works. Great work with this one. Like all the others, I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from Nosha17
The young Dr is displaying his talents, but he should not tarry too long, he may be needed back in the village where Julia may be in danger. Well narrated, very interesting story, well described setting and characters. Faye
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The young Dr is displaying his talents, but he should not tarry too long, he may be needed back in the village where Julia may be in danger. Well narrated, very interesting story, well described setting and characters. Faye
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from lancellot
a very interesting chapter and well written. You are quite right, people naturally respond to authority and knowledge, especially when in need. Well done.
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a very interesting chapter and well written. You are quite right, people naturally respond to authority and knowledge, especially when in need. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Very believable storyline. The war situation is described very aptly. Intriguing pace, captivating story. Can't wait to see what happens in the next sequel. Well done and keep writing.
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Very believable storyline. The war situation is described very aptly. Intriguing pace, captivating story. Can't wait to see what happens in the next sequel. Well done and keep writing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. One battle cause Julia to see a battle that occurred in a pass life. This could place her in great danger. Valerius did a great deed. He helped wounded soldiers. This brought attention to him and brought questions about him. He is too young to have the skills he displayed. This also put Vaerius in danger. Great work.
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I love the story. One battle cause Julia to see a battle that occurred in a pass life. This could place her in great danger. Valerius did a great deed. He helped wounded soldiers. This brought attention to him and brought questions about him. He is too young to have the skills he displayed. This also put Vaerius in danger. Great work.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from Michaelk
I liked this chapter. Valerius is beginning to believe in himself and his abilities. It appears as if he is starting to do as Julia does with feeling emotions from his past life. I liked how he handled the soldiers, firm and authoritative, but not to the point where he gets into trouble.
Great pacing, great descriptions, great chapter.
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I liked this chapter. Valerius is beginning to believe in himself and his abilities. It appears as if he is starting to do as Julia does with feeling emotions from his past life. I liked how he handled the soldiers, firm and authoritative, but not to the point where he gets into trouble.
Great pacing, great descriptions, great chapter.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from gypsycaravan
Multiple sightings at various places? Good question to ponder at the end of this chapter. Is it reincarnation or maybe just a parallel dimension? You are causing my brain to revolve much too rapidly, mikey. Why didn't the soldiers insist Valerius accompany the wounded soldiers back to the city? Will they come looking for him? Good work. I'm looking forward to more.
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Multiple sightings at various places? Good question to ponder at the end of this chapter. Is it reincarnation or maybe just a parallel dimension? You are causing my brain to revolve much too rapidly, mikey. Why didn't the soldiers insist Valerius accompany the wounded soldiers back to the city? Will they come looking for him? Good work. I'm looking forward to more.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
