Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Trellitia Tries to Reason With Julia"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from Sankey
Good chapter old friend. I liked that comment at the end "I know what I know" have heard that all over the place. Good to bringing the past about Rome and Persia and so on.
See a lot of "controlling" hehe going on! One spag at the beginning....You don't take long buddy ha....Previously Co(n)versations
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Good chapter old friend. I liked that comment at the end "I know what I know" have heard that all over the place. Good to bringing the past about Rome and Persia and so on.
See a lot of "controlling" hehe going on! One spag at the beginning....You don't take long buddy ha....Previously Co(n)versations
Comment Written 14-Oct-2014
Comment from CR Delport
For her that remembers everything, well, expect the names, it must be just as weird that they do not remember. Unfortunately few will understand. It is easier to label her crazy, and yes, if the church is involved, then it won't have a good outcome. Another great chapter.
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For her that remembers everything, well, expect the names, it must be just as weird that they do not remember. Unfortunately few will understand. It is easier to label her crazy, and yes, if the church is involved, then it won't have a good outcome. Another great chapter.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2014
Comment from faragon
I like this chapter in that it allows Julia to explain to a willing, non-judgmental person what she is feeling and what she knows. I feel her fate has been already decided though.
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I like this chapter in that it allows Julia to explain to a willing, non-judgmental person what she is feeling and what she knows. I feel her fate has been already decided though.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from Sasha
I absolutely love the whole concept of this story. I am enjoying it immensely. I like the pace, not to fast nor too slow. You are doing a great job with this. Off to read the next chapter.
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I absolutely love the whole concept of this story. I am enjoying it immensely. I like the pace, not to fast nor too slow. You are doing a great job with this. Off to read the next chapter.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
They live in dangerous times. The people know too much for this life. They speak of and use healing arts. They speak of past lives. These are things that this society does not understand. Death is close to those who speak this way. Julia feels compelled to speak. This may cause people to evolve. Great work.
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They live in dangerous times. The people know too much for this life. They speak of and use healing arts. They speak of past lives. These are things that this society does not understand. Death is close to those who speak this way. Julia feels compelled to speak. This may cause people to evolve. Great work.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
always mikey you pen very beautifully dear friend love the dim vision with an overactive this held me for a moment most enjoyable read pal excellent pen
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always mikey you pen very beautifully dear friend love the dim vision with an overactive this held me for a moment most enjoyable read pal excellent pen
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Another solid chapter. It does not have to be explained, just kept a mystery (it is better that way) but I wonder what it is that allows Julia to remember where Cassius cannot.
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Another solid chapter. It does not have to be explained, just kept a mystery (it is better that way) but I wonder what it is that allows Julia to remember where Cassius cannot.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Well, I'm glad they finally told her how to behave so she can stay alive for a while. You might have had Trellita make it even more clear that she was never to speak to anyone else about other, older lives. THat was never said clearly.
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Well, I'm glad they finally told her how to behave so she can stay alive for a while. You might have had Trellita make it even more clear that she was never to speak to anyone else about other, older lives. THat was never said clearly.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
Comment from Nosha17
Very interesting chapter, written with such wise words for Julia to take heed. Great dialogue and characters, they are so authentic. Most enjoyable as always. This is my favourite story of yours so far. Faye
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Very interesting chapter, written with such wise words for Julia to take heed. Great dialogue and characters, they are so authentic. Most enjoyable as always. This is my favourite story of yours so far. Faye
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
Comment from seaglass
Perhaps this interaction will help Julia see the light. Not all things known must be spoken aloud. So Valerius is not the only one she had shared a previous life with.
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Perhaps this interaction will help Julia see the light. Not all things known must be spoken aloud. So Valerius is not the only one she had shared a previous life with.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2014
