Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "How To Heal: A Discussion"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from onebrit
Once again a beautifully written chapter. The pace is slower here, but considering the depth of the subject matter that is perfectly appropriate. A great deal to ponder here.
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Once again a beautifully written chapter. The pace is slower here, but considering the depth of the subject matter that is perfectly appropriate. A great deal to ponder here.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Val is in a tough place now, told to let the sicko priest kill Julia and do nothing. No way he can do that. Great tension for the characters and suspense for us lucky readers. Another great chapter! Btw, congrats on landing in the winners' circle for book of the month! :)
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Val is in a tough place now, told to let the sicko priest kill Julia and do nothing. No way he can do that. Great tension for the characters and suspense for us lucky readers. Another great chapter! Btw, congrats on landing in the winners' circle for book of the month! :)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from Michaelk
Good chapter. You threw a ton of foreboding our way. I liked the interactions between Gregorio and Valerius. It reminded me of two kids sharing ideas and getting very excited about it. At the same time I saw Gregorio's warnings to be quite ominous.
The first part of your story, the conversation between Rastavius and Gregorio was hard to follow. i had to re-read to figure out who was talking.
Other than that, I thought it was a good chapter. Looking forward to more teacher/student chapters with Valerius and Gregorio.
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Good chapter. You threw a ton of foreboding our way. I liked the interactions between Gregorio and Valerius. It reminded me of two kids sharing ideas and getting very excited about it. At the same time I saw Gregorio's warnings to be quite ominous.
The first part of your story, the conversation between Rastavius and Gregorio was hard to follow. i had to re-read to figure out who was talking.
Other than that, I thought it was a good chapter. Looking forward to more teacher/student chapters with Valerius and Gregorio.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from robina1978
It goes at a fast and nice speed. I like that. You keep to the line and now it gets more thrilling. I will continue reading. Thanks for sharing.
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It goes at a fast and nice speed. I like that. You keep to the line and now it gets more thrilling. I will continue reading. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
this has slowed in pace considerably in this section. that is fine by me. the depth of discussion you are achieving here is unheard of here. this is a great piece to read and ponder. excellent.
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this has slowed in pace considerably in this section. that is fine by me. the depth of discussion you are achieving here is unheard of here. this is a great piece to read and ponder. excellent.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from seaglass
Oh No, looks like Julia may not have a protector in the doctor but it truly is the way society works. So many ghastly things have happened throughout history because to oppose it could get you killed.
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Oh No, looks like Julia may not have a protector in the doctor but it truly is the way society works. So many ghastly things have happened throughout history because to oppose it could get you killed.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
This is chillingly powerful, Mikey. I can't wait for it to unfold. Uncanny!
draws attention from He that created us. [ATTENTION is the subject of the sentence, HIM is the object, followed by WHO created us.]
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This is chillingly powerful, Mikey. I can't wait for it to unfold. Uncanny!
draws attention from He that created us. [ATTENTION is the subject of the sentence, HIM is the object, followed by WHO created us.]
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Valerius will learn that humans not to be trusted. Their warped sense of right and wrong is scary. I hope that Valerius can keep Julia safe. These so called priests won't hesitate to harm her. This is another well crafted chapter.
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Valerius will learn that humans not to be trusted. Their warped sense of right and wrong is scary. I hope that Valerius can keep Julia safe. These so called priests won't hesitate to harm her. This is another well crafted chapter.
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
Comment from Eigle Rull
Like the other pieces of yours that I have read, this one is very well written. The storyline is wonderful and the dialog is great. It was interesting and held my attention very well. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece.
Always with respect,
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Like the other pieces of yours that I have read, this one is very well written. The storyline is wonderful and the dialog is great. It was interesting and held my attention very well. I enjoyed reading this excellent piece.
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
