Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

To Dean Kuch,
You have created a most frightening and repulsive poem that sends the blood curdling.
I would put my money on the nuns before I'd have your music running wild in the opposite direction as to what lies ahead.
Charlene

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Thanks, Charlene...I think, LOL. No, I am only kidding. I sincerely appreciate your kind comments and review. :)

Comment from Leigh Ann

Excellent

Well she looks quite scary for a women of the cloth. lol This is great for Halloween. I think I'll look out for Sister Greene. She's not one to be played with. Great poem.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Thanks, Leigh Ann, and I don't think I would care to take a gander at her either!

I really am grateful for the excellent review, my friend. :}

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

This is a great entry for the Minute contest, Dean. Also, it's pretty darn creepy! You've stayed well within the guidelines of the contest rules. I haven't tried a minute poem, but I believe it's pretty difficult.

Your artwork is a perfect enhancement to your words.

Best of luck in the contest. Alana

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Alana, and I'm really gald you enjoyed it. I appreciate your well wishes and review.

reply by acerisestory on 10-Oct-2014

You are welcome, Dean!

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Who would have thought of this for a subject? Hubby went to Catholic school and said the nuns were MEAN! Creepy to think she would steal your eyes. So glad they gave up the penquin look. LOL

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Yeah, but now they blend in with everyone else...kinda like the terrorists were fighting. Oh, okay, so maybe that's not the best analogy, but it's all I could come up with on such short notice.

Thansk for the review, my friend. I appreciate it! :D

Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Dean
I have also heard that, years ago, nuns were mean and strict. You'd dare not cross them, or they'd whack you!
This is a creepy minute poem. How will she "steal your eyes"? That's a scary picture!
As always, an excellent presentation. Perfect syllable count for this form, 8/4/4/4
I also entered this contest, seemed like fun.
Good Luck, my friend!
cheers
Kimbob

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Thanks, Kimbob, and I wish you the best of luck with your entry as well, my friend. As far as how she steals your eyes, I don't think I want to know, but it's my guess that it's not a very pleasant operation.

Thanks so much for your outstanding comments.

Comment from Loren (7)

Excellent

The perfect little poem to scare little ones and maybe a few "fallen" adults as well. Seems like a good time to bring out this kind of horror in that it's getting close to Halloween - but then I think you must celebrate everyday! Loren

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Ha-ha, you're right, Loren, I do.

Thanks so much for your warm reply concerning my creepy little nursery rhyme. I sincerely appreciate it.

Comment from rod007

Excellent

This is a Sister from hell. It reminds me of the the Greek mythology about Medusa, where looking into her eyes would turn you into a stone. Which is better being sightless or being a stone? Well done, Dean.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

I'd opt for neither if given the choice, Rod, LOL.

Thanks so much for the outstanding comments, my friend. I sincerely appreciate it. :)

Comment from MissMerri

Exceptional

Well... the entire presentation of this creepy poem works so well together, and since I could find no way to improve the poem or the package, I felt it deserved a six-star rating. Well done, and I kind of get what you mean about the unnerving stare of Mother Superior. I've received a few of those myself. Excellent Halloween themed Minute poem.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Thanks a million, Adonna. I realize it's a bit different from your average minute poem entry, but you know me, I like to go that extra mile...or two, LOL.

Thanks so much for your exceptional comments and stellar rating. I'm happy to know that I am not the only one who's a bit creeped out by these habit-wearing women.

Much obliged! :)

Comment from olliebuster

Excellent

Thats telling it. Scary words indeed. I feel though that since the accent is on the eyes of Sister Green, they should be more in focus than the teeth. You write about the eyes and I see the teeth. The poem however was well put together.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Thanks, olliebuster, I appreciate your opinions and kind comments. Sister Greene has no eyes, though her teeth are certainly sharp enough. That's why she's still searching, hoping to find the perfect pair to enhance her stare. Perhaps she'll visit your bedside tonight, heh-heh...

All ghoulish kidding aside, i do appreciate your review very much, my friend. :}

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Love it. Maybe it's the clothing that they wear all black and just a little white. Great effects to your poems as always. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014

Thanks, Steve, I really appreciate you sharing your thoughts with me on the poem.

I'm not sure what it is about them that cause me to feel the way I do. Today, nuns wear more mainstream clothing, and they blend in with everyone else. I suppose it's too many horror movies. Nuns are rarely portrayed in a positive role in them.

Thanks again for the review, my friend. I will do my best to, "keep it up", for as long as I can. :]